LinkBack URL
About LinkBacks
Reply With QuoteI like this, its kinda saddening but in a good sort of way =P. If your contemplating suicide i suggest you get some counseling =P hahaha im just kidding. Good job
yes
no
U thought u knew me
But in all reality u just saw straight through me
Am I really that transparent
Or maybe I am more than what u see
Try'n to unlock all my secrets
But u don't seem to have the key
Understanding me is like try'n to understand life itself
Wanting to be rescued
But not wanting your help
They say u can't aid a person
If they don't help themselves
So I guess for right now I don't need anyone else
Don't take it the wrong way
Cause most people do
I am fight'n a battle within myself
I am just hope'n I don't lose
Choices are to be made
Don't know what to choose
If your life was a color
Pick one red or blue
Depict the lies from the truth
But both of them can still hurt u
So the questions u are now ask'n yourself
What do I do
Taking the journey of life can be a bumpy cruise
My ships operator is far from smooth
I keep tell'n myself I am here for a reason
What that is...
I wish I knew
What's in store for my destiny
Only God knows
But I am embracing it triumphantly
Never doubt'n the ability he gave to me
For this uphill battle before "eternity"
In the end all I can be is just me
Ask'n him to open up my eyes so I can see
Been blind for too long
Sick of sing'n the same tune on the same song
Tired of not fitting in
Not knowing where I belong
Sacraficing who I am just to try to get along
If that is what it takes
I'd rather just be alone
But when loneliness starts to take affect
The question is... what's next..?
Is this the life I chose to have..?
Solitude, emptiness, uncertainty, mixed with plenty sad
Where is my joy & happiness..?
I am cursed with nothing good
Blessed with everything bad
If this is my gift & curse
My next question is what can be worse..?
Living solo or wish'n u lived no more
Wait'n for the day u get carried by that hearse
Lying down in the dirt
Being covered by all mighty Mother Earth
Play'n a small part in the Great Circle of Life
The final questions are...
Did I even try or did I give up try'n 1 late night..?
Did my life even mean something to any1 esle..?
Or was it just meaningless..?
Even to myself...?
I might get all the answer to these questions in
"Life after Death..."
The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!
I like this, its kinda saddening but in a good sort of way =P. If your contemplating suicide i suggest you get some counseling =P hahaha im just kidding. Good job
No I'm not committing suicide... If I say I haven't thought about it I'll probably be lying, but no I chose life instead... This was the questions I had when I was think'n about it... And I just post this to try and help some ppl who is think'n or ever thought about it that they aren't alone... And that if they feel like they hit rock bottom that means u have no where else to go, but up... Thanks 4 the comment though...Originally Posted by Boo45
The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!
oh well that's life.. sometimes you just have
to go with the flow..
anyway, very very very very long poem you have there..
whew! hehehe... dont blame life..
i love the poem even if its long...
If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
I don't mind and you don't matter
I kind of liked the way you used syntax here, the word structure is kind of like local color.
Seduced by Flesh
I had questions in life ever since like "who are you???" and never to seem to stop asking me questions are probably part of life in my opinion of life asking myself on "how are question can fit me???" so I never took it a quick guess. but in this particular poem I never noticed that this can really treat you more then beyond.
Posting Permissions
Bookmarks