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Thread: Quetions of Life...

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    Quetions of Life...


    U thought u knew me
    But in all reality u just saw straight through me
    Am I really that transparent
    Or maybe I am more than what u see
    Try'n to unlock all my secrets
    But u don't seem to have the key

    Understanding me is like try'n to understand life itself
    Wanting to be rescued
    But not wanting your help
    They say u can't aid a person
    If they don't help themselves
    So I guess for right now I don't need anyone else

    Don't take it the wrong way
    Cause most people do
    I am fight'n a battle within myself
    I am just hope'n I don't lose
    Choices are to be made
    Don't know what to choose

    If your life was a color
    Pick one red or blue
    Depict the lies from the truth
    But both of them can still hurt u
    So the questions u are now ask'n yourself
    What do I do

    Taking the journey of life can be a bumpy cruise
    My ships operator is far from smooth
    I keep tell'n myself I am here for a reason
    What that is...
    I wish I knew

    What's in store for my destiny
    Only God knows
    But I am embracing it triumphantly
    Never doubt'n the ability he gave to me
    For this uphill battle before "eternity"

    In the end all I can be is just me
    Ask'n him to open up my eyes so I can see
    Been blind for too long
    Sick of sing'n the same tune on the same song
    Tired of not fitting in
    Not knowing where I belong

    Sacraficing who I am just to try to get along
    If that is what it takes
    I'd rather just be alone
    But when loneliness starts to take affect
    The question is... what's next..?

    Is this the life I chose to have..?
    Solitude, emptiness, uncertainty, mixed with plenty sad
    Where is my joy & happiness..?
    I am cursed with nothing good
    Blessed with everything bad

    If this is my gift & curse
    My next question is what can be worse..?
    Living solo or wish'n u lived no more
    Wait'n for the day u get carried by that hearse
    Lying down in the dirt
    Being covered by all mighty Mother Earth

    Play'n a small part in the Great Circle of Life
    The final questions are...
    Did I even try or did I give up try'n 1 late night..?
    Did my life even mean something to any1 esle..?
    Or was it just meaningless..?
    Even to myself...?
    I might get all the answer to these questions in
    "Life after Death..."

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: Quetions of Life...

    I like this, its kinda saddening but in a good sort of way =P. If your contemplating suicide i suggest you get some counseling =P hahaha im just kidding. Good job

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    Re: Quetions of Life...

    Quote Originally Posted by Boo45 View Post
    I like this, its kinda saddening but in a good sort of way =P. If your contemplating suicide i suggest you get some counseling =P hahaha im just kidding. Good job
    No I'm not committing suicide... If I say I haven't thought about it I'll probably be lying, but no I chose life instead... This was the questions I had when I was think'n about it... And I just post this to try and help some ppl who is think'n or ever thought about it that they aren't alone... And that if they feel like they hit rock bottom that means u have no where else to go, but up... Thanks 4 the comment though...

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: Quetions of Life...

    oh well that's life.. sometimes you just have
    to go with the flow..
    anyway, very very very very long poem you have there..
    whew! hehehe... dont blame life..
    i love the poem even if its long...

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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    Re: Quetions of Life...

    I kind of liked the way you used syntax here, the word structure is kind of like local color.
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    Re: Quetions of Life...

    I had questions in life ever since like "who are you???" and never to seem to stop asking me questions are probably part of life in my opinion of life asking myself on "how are question can fit me???" so I never took it a quick guess. but in this particular poem I never noticed that this can really treat you more then beyond.

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