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    quiet LOVE

    All my twisted thoughts re-float of you and I.
    When the lights are dim and my hands are shaking, you simply stare.
    Would it help if I turned a love song on.
    My tongue dances behind my lips for you.
    I would never get over you, if you ever walked away.
    It sure hit me hard when I knew you were here to stay.
    My heart is racing.
    You have a better touch, a better love.
    The thought of romance is stuck in a high place.

    You invited me into this night of intimacy.
    I watch myself in your eyes.
    You whisper you love me.
    Close your eyes and i'll close mine.
    Let these nights be remembered.
    Thoughts of love and risks.

    I wanted you to want me.
    I wouldn't say it but you knew I loved you.
    My hands keep searching for you.
    I've held onto what I have been feeling all this time.
    I've never forgotten that first kiss, or even that first touch.
    A thought of you has never even left my own impaired mind.
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    Re: quiet LOVE

    Awwwww, brings back memories. *tear*... I think its great, it was captivating enough for me to be able to research through my past n history n discover that part of myself. Good job.
    WHAT THE FUDGE!!!!

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    Re: quiet LOVE

    *sniff sniff* aww, that was so good... great job... keep it up!

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    Re: quiet LOVE

    *tears runs down face*

    that so great

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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    Re: quiet LOVE

    dam another poem with love n sadness in it....i wonder has someone put something in the water where u guys live? i mean these sad, love poems are popping up all over place....anyways i love it.....after loving someone so closely he's gone .....keep it up.

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    Re: quiet LOVE

    No, no, no. The two are still in love, very much. I think you should read my poem more closely.
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    Re: quiet LOVE

    Nothing more kool than a quite love! lol it was a nice poem indeed, keep it up.

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    Re: quiet LOVE

    Wondaba, Gloomy! I loved it! I always have enjoyed eveyones poems on this site, it's 2/3s the reason why I love it. Please write more!

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