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Old May 25, 2006, 06:05 PM   #1 (permalink)
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quiet LOVE

All my twisted thoughts re-float of you and I.
When the lights are dim and my hands are shaking, you simply stare.
Would it help if I turned a love song on.
My tongue dances behind my lips for you.
I would never get over you, if you ever walked away.
It sure hit me hard when I knew you were here to stay.
My heart is racing.
You have a better touch, a better love.
The thought of romance is stuck in a high place.

You invited me into this night of intimacy.
I watch myself in your eyes.
You whisper you love me.
Close your eyes and i'll close mine.
Let these nights be remembered.
Thoughts of love and risks.

I wanted you to want me.
I wouldn't say it but you knew I loved you.
My hands keep searching for you.
I've held onto what I have been feeling all this time.
I've never forgotten that first kiss, or even that first touch.
A thought of you has never even left my own impaired mind.
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Old May 25, 2006, 06:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: quiet LOVE

Awwwww, brings back memories. *tear*... I think its great, it was captivating enough for me to be able to research through my past n history n discover that part of myself. Good job.
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Old May 25, 2006, 09:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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*sniff sniff* aww, that was so good... great job... keep it up!
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Old May 25, 2006, 11:16 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: quiet LOVE

*tears runs down face*

that so great
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Old May 26, 2006, 01:06 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: quiet LOVE

dam another poem with love n sadness in it....i wonder has someone put something in the water where u guys live? i mean these sad, love poems are popping up all over place....anyways i love it.....after loving someone so closely he's gone .....keep it up.
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Old May 26, 2006, 09:23 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: quiet LOVE

No, no, no. The two are still in love, very much. I think you should read my poem more closely.
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Old May 26, 2006, 12:55 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Nothing more kool than a quite love! lol it was a nice poem indeed, keep it up.
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Old May 26, 2006, 02:28 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Re: quiet LOVE

Wondaba, Gloomy! I loved it! I always have enjoyed eveyones poems on this site, it's 2/3s the reason why I love it. Please write more!
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Re: quiet LOVE

I was able to see myself as an actor in this poem....I like the story telling, and the descriptions, but I thought the word choice was a bit plain. :0
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