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    Smile Radiance of a Sunflower

    Wide Radiance
    Buttermilk yellow, golden rays
    Something to reflect on lazy days
    Open wide
    Seeds inside
    Sweet light reflects

    Gentle radiance
    Joy resides
    In a sunflower's
    Peaceful insides
    Yellow, yellow
    Mellow yellow
    Every flower greets
    With a sweet "Hello."

    Radiant radiance
    Reflects the light
    Given to us
    on Ressurection Night
    When Satan lost a fight

    Radiance
    Colors of the Heart

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    Re: Radiance of a Sunflower

    Oh, I really like that. You did a great job! Keep it up.

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    Re: Radiance of a Sunflower

    omg really?? thx =]] i really like sunflowers they're so pretty!<3
    Colors of the Heart

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    Re: Radiance of a Sunflower

    Hmmm... a nice poem indeed... enjoyed reading it. I love the way you're describing this sunflower, you make me wanna go outside and get into my neighbours house to take a look at those sunflowers...

    And the last lines- great! Some mythology- a great way to end your poem!
    Nice work Cecilia! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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