Rain.....

By the cliff, along the shore
I watch the waves that shows memories of you more
I ask myself why I left you alone
Is this my destiny tells that I should live and die alone!
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The wind blews and passed through me
Like I said goodbye and doesn't respond to me
Your tears fell and slaps me in the face
Can't take what I've said and leaves me in this place

As I go down to go to shore
I saw a stone that is flat and strong
And I throw it up in the weak waves,
As the stone goes deep down the sea, the alarm was turned on
I ran through the base to see what's going on
Until I noticed that the attacked began in the place where she lives
So I go there and hopes that you are fine

The rain falls when I go inside the war.....
Every men that I kill is not enough to see you my dear
And every people that dies is the reason for them to pay for their cries
Every explosion that I pass the more reason that I shouldn't die
To live forever with you ti'll I die.....
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Finally, I came to your house
It's not yet destroyed and I hope your safe there inside
But one thing destroys all my hopes
The house explodes to itself in front of me.....
I feel so sad that this thing happened to me.....
I blame myself for what I've done
I left you alone and can't protect you from anyone
That's not the reason you are gone!
If only I'd stay this will not happen.....
I also want to die, i don't want to see tomorrow
Without the warmth of your arms that takes the sorrow
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I hear your voice calling my name
like im in heaven, dreaming with my shame
I hear again your voice one more time
I open my eyes, turns back at the same time
Your in front of me with those tears flowing into your face slowly
Run towards me and hug me tightly
Promise I'll never say goodbye to you again forever
And the rain suddenly stops and the war is over.....
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Wow! Genious, perfect, best and flawless ^_^ 1000/900 points for you! So that's umm .... 120%?

nice one, sagara... didn't know poetry was your field.....

Whoa! One of the greatest pieces of poetry that I have ever read! The details and the meaning incorporated into the poem is amazing, dude. Keep up the great work, and share some more. ^_^

wat rave said!! PERFECTO!!! 10000000/10 HAH! i beat u rave :p :D but it's a nc work sousuke.

every nice sagara. The jounrey through war, the hellish walk n seeing the flames of war still buring. Nice keep it up.

Haha, completely FMP styled ^^ Nice one. And the pics arent that half bad either

Nice one sagara-kun, keep it up man.