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    Rain.....

    By the cliff, along the shore
    I watch the waves that shows memories of you more
    I ask myself why I left you alone
    Is this my destiny tells that I should live and die alone!


    The wind blews and passed through me
    Like I said goodbye and doesn't respond to me
    Your tears fell and slaps me in the face
    Can't take what I've said and leaves me in this place

    As I go down to go to shore
    I saw a stone that is flat and strong
    And I throw it up in the weak waves,
    As the stone goes deep down the sea, the alarm was turned on
    I ran through the base to see what's going on
    Until I noticed that the attacked began in the place where she lives
    So I go there and hopes that you are fine

    The rain falls when I go inside the war.....
    Every men that I kill is not enough to see you my dear
    And every people that dies is the reason for them to pay for their cries
    Every explosion that I pass the more reason that I shouldn't die
    To live forever with you ti'll I die.....


    Finally, I came to your house
    It's not yet destroyed and I hope your safe there inside
    But one thing destroys all my hopes
    The house explodes to itself in front of me.....
    I feel so sad that this thing happened to me.....
    I blame myself for what I've done
    I left you alone and can't protect you from anyone
    That's not the reason you are gone!
    If only I'd stay this will not happen.....
    I also want to die, i don't want to see tomorrow
    Without the warmth of your arms that takes the sorrow


    I hear your voice calling my name
    like im in heaven, dreaming with my shame
    I hear again your voice one more time
    I open my eyes, turns back at the same time
    Your in front of me with those tears flowing into your face slowly
    Run towards me and hug me tightly
    Promise I'll never say goodbye to you again forever
    And the rain suddenly stops and the war is over.....
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    Re: Rain.....

    Wow! Genious, perfect, best and flawless ^_^ 1000/900 points for you! So that's umm .... 120%?

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    Re: Rain.....

    nice one, sagara... didn't know poetry was your field.....

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    Whoa! One of the greatest pieces of poetry that I have ever read! The details and the meaning incorporated into the poem is amazing, dude. Keep up the great work, and share some more. ^_^

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    Re: Rain.....

    wat rave said!! PERFECTO!!! 10000000/10 HAH! i beat u rave but it's a nc work sousuke.

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    Re: Rain.....

    every nice sagara. The jounrey through war, the hellish walk n seeing the flames of war still buring. Nice keep it up.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Rain.....

    Haha, completely FMP styled ^^ Nice one. And the pics arent that half bad either
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    Re: Rain.....

    Nice one sagara-kun, keep it up man.

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