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    Newbie Chanzor may be famous one day Chanzor may be famous one day Chanzor's Avatar
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    rain

    The rain it falls down
    Drops landing everywhere
    Me in the middle me in the rain
    As it falls down on me
    You cannot notice my tears
    It all just looks like rain
    But my heart hurts
    My heartaches in sorrow
    I have no where to go
    I have no one that cares
    No one that will save me
    From the rain falling down
    Channy

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    Re: rain

    Great sad poem, The tears mixed with the rain was great!
    Keep your good work up and a suggestion would be to
    Lengthin your poem! !

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