Great sad poem, The tears mixed with the rain was great!
Keep your good work up and a suggestion would be to
Lengthin your poem!!
The rain it falls down
Drops landing everywhere
Me in the middle me in the rain
As it falls down on me
You cannot notice my tears
It all just looks like rain
But my heart hurts
My heartaches in sorrow
I have no where to go
I have no one that cares
No one that will save me
From the rain falling down
Channy
Great sad poem, The tears mixed with the rain was great!
Keep your good work up and a suggestion would be to
Lengthin your poem!!
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