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    The Rain

    Everytime the rain falls
    It reminds me of my loss
    That most painful day
    Now everytime I see rain
    Tears flow down my face
    Because part of me died
    When I let you go
    So now, everytime
    I see the rain
    It reminds me of my loss

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    Re: The Rain

    ahhh another poet better than me i love the poem though its almost the same one as the one that my girl friend back

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    Re: The Rain

    hehe thank you! I'm mostly an expert at poem writing! Thx again!

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    Re: The Rain

    Amazing poem!!!! Really amazing!!!! This poem is sad in a way but I love it!!!!! ReallY! I hope to see more!
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    Re: The Rain

    Short and sweet! Emphasis on SWEET. ^_^ I liked this poem alot. I find it amusing when people manage to squees so much emotion into like 4 or 5 sentences. Your poem was very well written as well. Mad props! ^_^

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    Re: The Rain

    Great poem, kinda sad but extremely true to life!!! Good job!

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    Re: The Rain

    Very good. I can feel the sadness in between the lines that makes this most excelent. You have paid attention to me after all....



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    Re: The Rain

    good job at writing that very emotional poem i love it very strong words♥daprincess
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