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    Rain [3]

    I think of the days when your still here
    Your always there for me to cheer me up when I'm feeling blue
    That realizes me I should not take things personally
    But now your gone, because of what I've done
    The day when the blue skies turns to gray

    Every war that I won, there's this rain that joins me on
    Sometimes I'm used to it, `cause I think I understand all what I've done
    Sit from the statue that appears like a devil
    It's still raining like it was neverending
    I lie down in a open field to watch the stars
    But the rainclouds blocks the way upon your wishing star
    I forgot there was the rain that reminds me you are gone

    Smiled and mesmerized the memories of your past
    Everytime I gaze at you, you always replenishes my soul
    You pump my heart with your hand, and if you stop I am done
    I promise you I'll never leave you and protect you with my life
    I'm always there for you to catch you when you fall
    But I guess I will never be there to catch you anymore

    I look at a place in the park we always go
    See someone in a umbrella, wonder who I saw
    She turned around and she looks like you, no it's really you
    You also see me and runs towards me
    Hug me tightly and cried deeply
    Now I realized the feeling of being hurt and left behind
    I'm wrong for what I've done, and caused me to be dark
    The rain stops, a shine comes out and ray at us
    We're both happy, so the sign the sunrise shows which makes a rainbow upon us.....

    Any comments that are classified as good or bad is acceptable so you can post here..... Thank you.....
    -Sousuke Sagara
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    Re: Rain [3]

    i really like tis....truly...since im sorta in a depressing mood tis juz warms my heart...
    my fav phrase

    I look at a place in the park we always go
    See someone in a umbrella, wonder who I saw
    i dunno it juz kinda gets to me...one of ur best works yet 9/10
    p/s the last phrase- were...i think it shud be "we're"

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    Re: Rain [3]

    Yeah he did good.
    Why cant anyone look at my 2nd song?
    Anyway's he did good.
    9.5/10

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    Re: Rain [3]

    I just have one thing to say " this poem rocks man" nice job.

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    Re: Rain [3]

    Wow,that's awesome!!! Great job Sousuke
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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