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Reply With Quotelove ur poem...sorry i don't have a poem yet...i think that is true...hmm i'll make up a poem next time when i come back to this forum...
I thought of one thing in my life
But that one thing cannot suffice
How can this bring me happiness
If it always brings me sadness
After that day, I lost my trust
My depression makes a big fuss
Among the people I care for
But I can't help it therefore
A blind game of love
I shouldn't push or shove
To get that someone I want
With all the hard to get and taunt
I thought I had him in my grasp
Yet it's very far from that clasp
How foolish I can be
How hard is it to see
That I'm not destined
Not of his consent
Save me from this despair
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love ur poem...sorry i don't have a poem yet...i think that is true...hmm i'll make up a poem next time when i come back to this forum...
aww... it's kinda sad but i like it keep ↑ the good work i hope to see more
♥~*The Princess*~♥
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Make sure to add periods and commas to make it flow better. Other than that, it's a nice poem. Good job.
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Because they have obtained that level they are arrogant. You have to kep in mind when you talk about these guys they are kind of dorks who probably didn't excel at much and this is their only outlet to flex their muscles. Their egos would suffer no less so the the forum suffers some more. Watch one way or another they will probably repond to this post with a threat. But there are better forums out there. Private messege Zev.
i agree with princess, its really sad. but its still good, keep up the godd work akura-chan
It's a very good poem, it's a little sad like "shouichishindo" and "iluvmyloser" said.... Anyway keep up the good work Akura ^^
Agreed with Alucard and the rest...Deo said what would help the poem more..
It's a good poem ^^good job..
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thank you all so much everyone!^^ And deo I'll b e sure to do that next time thnks for the pointer so anyways glad all of you liked it~!^^
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