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    Rain

    Short little poem.... dunno if it's understandable or good but I just made it... ... hope you like it..

    Rain

    I need the rain
    Now more than ever
    I need it to come
    And wash me away

    I need it to fall
    Right here with me
    So that I can cry
    For all the rest of time

    So that my tears won't be seen
    By the ones who need me
    And the ones who care
    I'll always be there....

    Yet I hurt him again
    So i need to leave
    All i do is hurt people
    So it would make the world much better...........

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    Re: Rain

    that is sad, remindsme of my poem! With the rain covering up the tears part. yes it is understandable! Keep up the work! cant wait for more!
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    Re: Rain

    Wow angelicdeamon this poem is really good I felt it too. I understand (like highteckdudu said) about needing the rain to wash your tears. I feel like that alot too great job though cant wait to see more!
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    Re: Rain

    I've been there before.

    Wishing that no one can see how much you hurt... It's hard.
    I like your writing though. This is a good poem! I hope to read more. ^_^


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    Thanks you guys.. I'm glad you like it.. ^-^ It really means a lot to me.

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    Re: Rain

    This sounds like the song by hilary duff..

    Hmm a very nice poem indeed.. nicely done

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