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    Rain~!

    I like it in the rain
    No one can see I'm crying,
    All the pain is hidden
    While I'm slowly dying,
    The streaks on my face
    I can blame on the rain,
    Hiding the lies and
    Masking the pain,
    The fear in my eyes
    Is the only trace,
    As the rain clears away
    Every tear from my face,
    The water slowly drips
    Down from my hair,
    In the rain no one need know
    That I'm even there,
    Soaked to the skin
    Every single part of me,
    I love being in the rain
    As I'm finally free...



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    Re: Rain~!

    Wow.... This was really great. It flowed so well, almost like lyrics. Infact it reminded me of an old motown song "I wish it would it rain".

    Impressive. I'll quote my favorite part.

    "The fear in my eyes
    Is the only trace,
    As the rain clears away
    Every tear from my face,"

    Brilliant!
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    Re: Rain~!

    O.o WOW!! This is soooooooo wonderful Akura!!! I love everything about it!! The emotion and the picture it presented....is just down right amazing!!! Awesome job!! ^__^
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Rain~!

    Sorry, but I don't buy that this is your own work. It was posted by a deviantART user in December of 2006:

    Rain by =AnominusMidge on deviantART

    as well as being quoted here only a few days before you posted it on AO:

    maziar t - Songs iLike™

    Neither one of these people is you, so I doubt this is something you wrote yourself.

    Closing.
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