Wow.... This was really great. It flowed so well, almost like lyrics. Infact it reminded me of an old motown song "I wish it would it rain".
Impressive. I'll quote my favorite part.
"The fear in my eyes
Is the only trace,
As the rain clears away
Every tear from my face,"
Brilliant!


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