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the storm is over
the rain is gone
i can see sun through the clouds
the sky was dark and dreary
i couldnt see clearly
but now the light has come
and the storm has cleared
all is not lost,
i see the light through the clouds
and know there has been better days
but lifes getting easier and the troubles have soon
to pass
but for i know my rain i has cleared
for now i know there is nothing to fear :thumb:
beatiful beatiful its seems as though you have had hard times but so far you are better im glad i dont want you to hurt
I like the idea of the poem. I'd suggest using punctuation and longer stanzas. Perhaps making some breaks along the way.
yea i agree with him .....
Thanx i'll see what i can do
My shoulders feel much lighter after reading such a short and lifting poem.
That was pretty sweet, nice poem.
*claps* great poem that was very impressive!