+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: the rain has cleared

  1. #1
    Otaku tupacs_wifey may be famous one day tupacs_wifey may be famous one day tupacs_wifey's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2006
    Location
    In My own heart
    Posts
    440
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    the rain has cleared

    the storm is over
    the rain is gone
    i can see sun through the clouds
    the sky was dark and dreary
    i couldnt see clearly
    but now the light has come
    and the storm has cleared
    all is not lost,
    i see the light through the clouds
    and know there has been better days
    but lifes getting easier and the troubles have soon
    to pass
    but for i know my rain i has cleared
    for now i know there is nothing to fear
    Last edited by tupacs_wifey; Jul 28, 2006 at 07:34 AM.

    HolderOfThe
    DarkChalice's LiL sis

  2. #2
    Newbie Imhiei may be famous one day Imhiei may be famous one day Imhiei's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Location
    compton or in my mind
    Posts
    14
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: the rain has cleared

    beatiful beatiful its seems as though you have had hard times but so far you are better im glad i dont want you to hurt

    ive got my eyez on you

    (\__/)
    (='.'=)
    ('')_('')
    This is Bunny. Copy and paste Bunny into your Signature to help him gain world domination

  3. #3
    Domme Kasai may be famous one day Kasai may be famous one day Kasai's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    Florida
    Posts
    2,736
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: the rain has cleared

    I like the idea of the poem. I'd suggest using punctuation and longer stanzas. Perhaps making some breaks along the way.
    Seduced by Flesh


  4. #4
    Newbie Imhiei may be famous one day Imhiei may be famous one day Imhiei's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Location
    compton or in my mind
    Posts
    14
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: the rain has cleared

    yea i agree with him .....

    ive got my eyez on you

    (\__/)
    (='.'=)
    ('')_('')
    This is Bunny. Copy and paste Bunny into your Signature to help him gain world domination

  5. #5
    Otaku tupacs_wifey may be famous one day tupacs_wifey may be famous one day tupacs_wifey's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2006
    Location
    In My own heart
    Posts
    440
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: the rain has cleared

    Thanx i'll see what i can do

    HolderOfThe
    DarkChalice's LiL sis

  6. #6
    Otaku pigtaru may be famous one day pigtaru may be famous one day pigtaru's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Location
    Elk Grove, CA USA
    Posts
    408
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts

    Re: the rain has cleared

    My shoulders feel much lighter after reading such a short and lifting poem.

    o~Piggy-san~o

  7. #7
    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Posts
    4,293
    Thanks
    30
    Thanked 38 Times in 36 Posts

    Re: the rain has cleared

    That was pretty sweet, nice poem.

  8. #8
    Otaku N!tr0-Glyc3r1n may be famous one day N!tr0-Glyc3r1n may be famous one day N!tr0-Glyc3r1n's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Location
    where ur not
    Posts
    288
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: the rain has cleared

    *claps* great poem that was very impressive!


    thank u SasuraiHell
    go -=NOOBZ=- clan!

+ Reply to Thread

Similar Threads

  1. rain
    By Chanzor in forum Poems
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: Jun 19, 2006, 10:00 AM
  2. Looking For Anime DVD's
    By MP666 in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 13
    Last Post: Jul 02, 2005, 10:02 PM
  3. the meaning of Wolf's Rain ending
    By Innerhell in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: Apr 15, 2005, 07:58 PM
  4. The Rain
    By Shade/K' Heart in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: Jan 31, 2005, 02:22 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts