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Reply With Quotebeatiful beatiful its seems as though you have had hard times but so far you are better im glad i dont want you to hurt
the storm is over
the rain is gone
i can see sun through the clouds
the sky was dark and dreary
i couldnt see clearly
but now the light has come
and the storm has cleared
all is not lost,
i see the light through the clouds
and know there has been better days
but lifes getting easier and the troubles have soon
to pass
but for i know my rain i has cleared
for now i know there is nothing to fear
Last edited by tupacs_wifey; Jul 28, 2006 at 07:34 AM.
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beatiful beatiful its seems as though you have had hard times but so far you are better im glad i dont want you to hurt
ive got my eyez on you
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I like the idea of the poem. I'd suggest using punctuation and longer stanzas. Perhaps making some breaks along the way.
Seduced by Flesh
yea i agree with him .....
ive got my eyez on you
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Thanx i'll see what i can do
HolderOfTheDarkChalice's LiL sis
My shoulders feel much lighter after reading such a short and lifting poem.
o~Piggy-san~o
That was pretty sweet, nice poem.
*claps* great poem that was very impressive!
thank u SasuraiHell
go -=NOOBZ=- clan!
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