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Reply With QuoteWhoa dude! Strong emotions and deep meaning. Beautifully written all the way. You are perfecting in this art each time you write a new poem. Keep that up! Hope to see more.
-Sagara-
" Rain " A tribute to a moment in time. Rain:
Have you ever seen rain the way I have?
It comes and goes so easily,
Just like my happiness,
It’s so short lived,
I have no where to go now,
No where to run,
No where to hide,
I’m all alone,
But looking into the rain I see you,
Dancing,
Your beauty even shows through this haze,
Your hair glitters in it,
I wish I could see you like this again,
That’s why I want it to rain,
I can see you dancing again and again,
I wish this moment would last forever,
But it only comes with the rain,
Will it ever rain again?
Whoa dude! Strong emotions and deep meaning. Beautifully written all the way. You are perfecting in this art each time you write a new poem. Keep that up! Hope to see more.
-Sagara-
Indeed I am.
Thnx for the support agian.
Yay!! Go viper! I always look for your latest poems as soon as I get on! I love this poem. It seems like something that only few people would appreciate, the rain. Most think it's a burden, but others love it. I reminds some, as you displayed, of passed away or far away loved ones. B.E.A. Utiful. Plz, write more!
I will asap.
I gtg for now though sry.
Your emotions in your "Rain" are very nice to read.....
I love adding emotion to my poems.
Impresssive you put emotion in your poem.
but I think I like the other poems you made.
But good job. ^_^
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
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