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    Rain:

    Have you ever seen rain the way I have?
    It comes and goes so easily,
    Just like my happiness,
    It’s so short lived,
    I have no where to go now,
    No where to run,
    No where to hide,
    I’m all alone,
    But looking into the rain I see you,
    Dancing,
    Your beauty even shows through this haze,
    Your hair glitters in it,
    I wish I could see you like this again,
    That’s why I want it to rain,
    I can see you dancing again and again,
    I wish this moment would last forever,
    But it only comes with the rain,
    Will it ever rain again?

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    Re: " Rain " A tribute to a moment in time.

    Whoa dude! Strong emotions and deep meaning. Beautifully written all the way. You are perfecting in this art each time you write a new poem. Keep that up! Hope to see more.

    -Sagara-

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    Re: " Rain " A tribute to a moment in time.

    Indeed I am.
    Thnx for the support agian.

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    Re: " Rain " A tribute to a moment in time.

    Yay!! Go viper! I always look for your latest poems as soon as I get on! I love this poem. It seems like something that only few people would appreciate, the rain. Most think it's a burden, but others love it. I reminds some, as you displayed, of passed away or far away loved ones. B.E.A. Utiful. Plz, write more!

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    I will asap.
    I gtg for now though sry.

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    Re: " Rain " A tribute to a moment in time.

    Your emotions in your "Rain" are very nice to read.....

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    Re: " Rain " A tribute to a moment in time.

    I love adding emotion to my poems.

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    Re: " Rain " A tribute to a moment in time.

    Impresssive you put emotion in your poem.

    but I think I like the other poems you made.

    But good job. ^_^

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