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Old Aug 19, 2007, 06:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Rain and you

Rain and you

When it rains,
pouring water from the sky cleanse the earth.
The light projects out a picture,
falling water shows an image of you.

The heaven cries,
it made the the land cold.
Shivering in the dark.
How i wished i could be there,...with you.

Clouds are dark and huge.
Blocking the rays of the sun.
Its damp and uncomfortable.
If only i can hug you.

Thunders and lightnings surge the skies.
Some hits the earth and trees.
There may be fire,
but it can't last as long as mine for you.

Wind pushes the leaves and roofs.
Falling hail of water makes unpleasant sounds.
Clamping ears with my hands will not help much,
but it is totally gone with just a voice from you.

Even though i am under a roof and inside walls,
on the rug and tucked in the mattress by the fireplace.
It's not warm enough or dry enough for me.
The flood in my eyes and my heart is too much to bear.

Please stop the rain...dear.
Though you always said the rain is good.
I know...i noticed..i learned...
but nothing is good without you here.
because i missed you~
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Old Aug 19, 2007, 06:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Rain and you

Awwwwww! That is so sad. It brought a tear to my eyes. Good poem Rayme, just like always.
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Old Aug 19, 2007, 07:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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*starts crying* it's beautiful ray... i love everything about it... it's perfect...
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Old Aug 19, 2007, 07:06 AM   #4 (permalink)
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a 20 minutes work made 2 girls cried already.. @.@ oh my...

^^ ty for the comment icy

aww..jamie.. @.@ don't cry.. :/ *hugs* ^^
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Old Aug 19, 2007, 01:35 PM   #5 (permalink)
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it didnt make me cry yet lol ^^ but i know wee bets about it to ^^ and its an awsome poem ray keep it up ur new stuff rocks
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Old Aug 19, 2007, 06:21 PM   #6 (permalink)
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*wipes off tears*......it...it touches my heart to know you....*sniffles*...make such wonderful poems......very good one ray very well emotions and words...now if you excuse me*cries*
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Old Aug 19, 2007, 06:29 PM   #7 (permalink)
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*wipes off tears*......it...it touches my heart to know you....*sniffles*...make such wonderful poems......very good one ray very well emotions and words...now if you excuse me*cries*
*hugs ray tightly and looks at iluvmyloser*

*walks over and rubs your back* it's okay^^
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Old Aug 19, 2007, 07:11 PM   #8 (permalink)
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That was a wonderful poem Ray very sad but beautiful I can't wait to hear more keep up the good work!!
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awww :/ ty my friend ^^

really? thx tora tora yata and i will do so ^^
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awww :/ ty my friend ^^

really? thx tora tora yata and i will do so ^^
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i really like the description you protrayed^^ it was very beautifu=]
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