Thread: Rain and you

Originally Posted by RayMe

Rain and you

When it rains,
pouring water for the sky cleanse the earth.
The light projects out a picture,
falling water shows an image of you.

The heaven cries,
it made the the land cold.
Shivering in the dark.
How i wished i could be there,...with you.

Clouds are dark and huge.
Blocking the rays of the sun.
Its damp and uncomfortable.
If only i can hug you.

Thunders and lightnings surge the skies.
Some hits the earth and trees.
There may be fire,
but it can last as long as mine for you.

Wind pushes the leaves and roofs.
Falling hail of water makes unpleasant sounds.
Clamping ears with my hands will not help much,
but it is totally gone with just a voice from you.

Even though i am under a roof and inside walls,
on the rug and tucked in the mattress by the fireplace.
It's not warm enough or dry enough for me.
The flood in my eyes and my heart is too much to bear.

Please stop the rain...dear.
Though you always said the rain is good.
I know...i noticed..i learned...
but nothing is good without you here.
because i missed you~

same with this one...i could sing it and u know...

all i can say is wow!
you show so much feel in your work
i enjoyed reading it.
you are good word
great jod

^^ well ty aqua...u can sing it? i sure wanna listen ^^

Ty chrysty ^^ im touched..

awwww that is so sad!! *cries* very sad but very good poem indeed!!! I loved it Ray nice job GO RAY!!!lol^^

:/ aww... don't cry Thank you Akura... i promise i will ^^

Maybe you should gather all your poems and make it into a book and see if it'll be as positive as here.... Then you could make some money out of it to

xD good idea...if only i know how and i have a publisher.. :/ thx for the idea.. xD