That was just beautiful, i like how you made the earth sound like a crying girl, good metaphor. Very poetic and deep. Kudos to that.
Lets see if you can make out whats the rain and the rainbow
As she gulped away
her slowly awakening tears
the clouds rumbling above
put into motion : their gears
the sky slowly came to life ,
as the Lord opened the gates
of Heaven , the to-be residence
of a million fortunate fates
Then to fight her inner demons
God's little soldiers heaved down
as quick as lightning toward her
and washed her eyes so ever brown
then through her revived vision she saw
that out came the banded spectrum of colours , the reminder
of Gods never ending faithful love to her
^_^ Hope you like it ^_^
That was just beautiful, i like how you made the earth sound like a crying girl, good metaphor. Very poetic and deep. Kudos to that.
Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.
Sarentai Kyoukan (Dec 21, 2011)
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