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    Re: Rainy Day

    "On the sidewalk you can see
    the tears of the sky falling down hard.
    It falls down from the gray blanket of
    clouds, only to hit the ground and disspear"

    ooh.. love the descriptions in this poem... nicely done.. ^^
    and the way you put the description together with the main point of this poem... cool

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    Re: Rainy Day

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    "On the sidewalk you can see
    the tears of the sky falling down hard.
    It falls down from the gray blanket of
    clouds, only to hit the ground and disspear"

    ooh.. love the descriptions in this poem... nicely done.. ^^
    and the way you put the description together with the main point of this poem... cool
    Why, thank you! This poem is one that, when I read it, I go, "Wow! I wrote that?" LOL. On a serious note, I've been trying to use different writing methods, so my last few poems have been kinda experimental. In any case, I'm glad you like it! Thanks again!


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    Re: Rainy Day

    Once again, you did a great job on this poem! Love it, love it, love it! Keep it up. =D

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    Re: Rainy Day

    Quote Originally Posted by Tifa Lockhart View Post
    Once again, you did a great job on this poem! Love it, love it, love it! Keep it up. =D
    Hey, thanks! I'm glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comment and taking the time to read this as well. ^_^


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