"On the sidewalk you can see
the tears of the sky falling down hard.
It falls down from the gray blanket of
clouds, only to hit the ground and disspear"
ooh.. love the descriptions in this poem... nicely done.. ^^
and the way you put the description together with the main point of this poem... cool
Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
I'm BACK AO!
Once again, you did a great job on this poem! Love it, love it, love it! Keep it up. =D