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    Ravens eye(part 2)

    The ribbon of assphalt---once black,now grey from the
    years of unrelenting sun---streched out like a never ending arrow shaft;
    in the distance, mirages_like dreams_sprang into life,shimmered,and silently dissolved at the speeding automobile.The caves were geting darker as i seeked and the caves have just was tumbleing rocks all around me,the only thing that would save me would be that one grey ribbon of hope.

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    Re: Ravens eye(part 2)

    Yea I Love It Please Write More!!!!!!!!!!!!
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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