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    Ray of Light...

    I've been lying here and wide awake
    Till the nignt dies out and day to break
    Every minute seems like
    Endless hours
    When i'm with you

    I watch the stars, the waves from a cliff
    Thinking of you if you are now asleep
    I feel like I'm in heaven with your touch
    But now I'm in hell now that your gone

    I remember the nights
    We're lying under the universe
    I remember the nights
    We're together through the rain

    I see a ray of light
    From the clouds through the night
    Can't help to stare it's just too bright
    Wish you were here tonight

    I miss your eyes, your smile and lovely face
    I can't forget your sweet embrace
    We both could share our endless dreams
    If you were here

    I guess it's better if we were off that way
    We'll find ourselves and come what may
    If i could have one wish then I
    Will beg for you to stay

    I've been to many places
    I've met different races
    I've seen so many faces
    But it's you i can't forget

    I've been through high & low
    'til I got nowhere to go
    I got this funny feeling
    That it's you i'm still missing

    We've always been so strong
    We almost had it all
    Dont give up now or leave
    `Cause we will always be

    So baby come on dont let this go
    You know I love you so
    Don't throw it away
    Let our love grow
    I cant let you go...

    For my friends here in Anime Online... I care for you...

    Any comments that are classified as good or bad is acceptable so you can post here..... Thank you.....
    -Sousuke Sagara

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    Re: Ray of Light...

    Ahh, a post before I leave ^_^

    Awesome work Sousuke..... I just skimmed through it, but I found it quite effective. It was really easy to understand, and simple, yet quite meaningful too. I love the rhyming scheme as well.

    And lots of descriptive events in there too

    Nice work ^_^
    Kastelic's creation



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    Re: Ray of Light...

    that was awesome man, it was really nice. Keep it up man.

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