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    For Rayme...

    Darkness 1

    It comes and goes
    Leaving only pain
    As it passes
    There is no gain

    Leaving only pain
    Haunting us for life
    Bringing only misery
    We might turn to a knife

    As it passes
    Our eyes become glazed
    Hurting people around us
    Holding to much power

    There is no gain
    No profits to share
    Until we are finally consumed
    By the love that once bloomed

    Darkness 2


    As darkness closes in
    And you feel all alone
    Remember your family
    Sitting at home

    Remember your potential
    Your life and love
    Remember I will be waiting
    Like a shinning white dove

    With love in my heart
    I will wait for you
    To chase away the darkness
    Which I will help you move

    Darkness may linger
    Yes it's true
    But remember this
    It's that I love you

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    Re: For Rayme...

    Aww, this makes me wanna cry. ~sniff~ This was very good, Awsome job!!!

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    Re: For Rayme...

    Quote Originally Posted by angelface201092 View Post
    Darkness 1

    It comes and goes
    Leaving only pain
    As it passes
    There is no gain

    Leaving only pain
    Haunting us for life
    Bringing only misery
    We might turn to a knife

    As it passes
    Our eyes become glazed
    Hurting people around us
    Holding to much power

    There is no gain
    No profits to share
    Until we are finally consumed
    By the love that once bloomed

    Darkness 2


    As darkness closes in
    And you feel all alone
    Remember your family
    Sitting at home

    Remember your potential
    Your life and love
    Remember I will be waiting
    Like a shinning white dove

    With love in my heart
    I will wait for you
    To chase away the darkness
    Which I will help you move

    Darkness may linger
    Yes it's true
    But remember this
    It's that I love you
    Thats so sweet. It's seem so romantic to me. I love romance things! I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: For Rayme...

    Wow... Where's rayme?!?! XD
    I gotta hand it to ya.. short and sweet really did the work this time ^^ Both meaningful and creative. I like that you named it darkness, and made it into 2 .. Great job.

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    Re: For Rayme...

    thank you guys... umm... there's only one little problem... I don't feel that way about rayme because he doesn't feel that way about me and for your information I have a loving relationship with the most wonderful guy I have ever known.... granted I am dating him or was until he read this but whatever... I have to fix things with him... I like rayme... I love someone else...

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    Re: For Rayme...

    oh rayme you have good luck some one write apoem for you ...(just joking)

    that was very romantic one ..i like read it ...good job

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    Re: For Rayme...

    Am thinking you had dedicated to the person you starting or you already loving someone? I like the poem, its more better than any of my own, keep it up and I'll be looking forward to reading more.

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    Re: For Rayme...

    Ahh... for me? ty ^^ sheesh...

    hmm...angelface...are u Jamie? @.@ im confused now...because in my yahoo mails...jamie strongly said,..u are not jamie..and she has never made a new account... -.- im confused now... and how come u got 1 of her poems? she send me that poem way b4 u sent it...

    Hmm..elie..im here.. xD been away for a while..
    lol...ty xxoxx ^^

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