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    Read this: I long for YOU! ...

    My love, I call you,
    Because I want you, not physically
    But emotionally, spiritually, mentally …
    I need you, here in my arms, to hear you squeal, to see you smile, to feel your lips
    On mine

    I want to hold your face in my hands,
    To keep me smiling
    I need you here beside me, always,
    To keep my sanity
    I want to love you more and more,
    So I can wipe your tears away
    I want to redeem you,
    So you can fly, by being in my arms
    I wanna lock my lips with yours, baby,
    So I can experience passion, desire, passion, love and compassion

    You have no idea what you do to me,
    You do not know what I feel when I’m with you,
    I’ve been waiting for someone like you,
    To love me, hold me, kiss me, keep me, nurture me

    Baby, I love you,
    I love you, I adore you and I cherish you
    You are the best girl ever, don’t you ever forget it
    And I want you to live, don’t you ever regret it

    As I keep you close in my arms,
    Never letting go,
    My mind races … my heart pounds … I fluster,
    What do I do? … I get so excited
    To look inside your wonderful eyes

    To kiss your sweet lips
    To hold your adorable face

    To smile at you, wipe your tears away
    Keep you against my heart, closely, keeping you
    Safe, warm and loved

    As we lay down, I close my eyes slowly,
    No keeping track of the time
    I kiss you deep, longingly and with everything I have

    I loose myself into you
    I long to feel you more, to keep your body against mine
    I blush, as you smile,
    … and from there …







    Well, I hope you enjoy, this is my best romantic poem ever, and atomik_sprout, don’t be afraid to use some of the lines from this

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    Re: Read this: I long for YOU! ...

    My love, I call you,
    Because I want you, not physically
    But emotionally, spiritually, mentally …
    I need you, here in my arms, to hear you squeal, to see you smile, to feel your lips
    On mine


    I want to hold your face in my hands,
    To keep me smiling
    I need you here beside me, always,
    To keep my sanity
    I want to love you more and more,
    So I can wipe your tears away
    I want to redeem you,
    So you can fly, by being in my arms
    I wanna lock my lips with yours, baby,
    So I can experience passion, desire, passion, love and compassion
    i like this part...
    the bolded part sounded a bit naughty.. xD

    Hmmm someone is shouting i love you in the air with long phrases..

    A very nice poem rave..it was sweet... and completely says what you want.. i think.. but i can't read your mind can i..gah.. ignore me.. xD

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    Re: Read this: I long for YOU! ...

    -laughs- Trust me, you do not want to ... ^_^
    And what was the "" for! I said it's not about lust, so not always physical relationship!
    >.> Dammit ...

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    Re: Read this: I long for YOU! ...

    ahh nothing... it's just something coming through my head... hehe... pardon me for being pervy

    -laughs- Trust me, you do not want to ... ^_^
    oh yes... thank you for the heads up or warning.. keep it up..

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