ready for love

Ready For Love"

You took a piece of my heart
I never thought that this could fall apart
You said you fell in love
And this was more than I had ever been afraid of
Another life
Another happy ending cuts like a knife
Another place, another time
Another hand to touch, another sun to shine

You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
I'm running around but there's no place to hide
I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided
Why can't they forgive me these demons inside
Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up
I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided
How can it be that you're ready for love

Ready for love ...

How can it be that you're ready for love .....

Time will tell
A single day had helped me break this spell
Don't want to be alone
When will I be understood when is my kingdom to come
Another boy, another life
Another happy ending, and I'll be alive
Another place, another time
Another hand to touch, another sun to shine

You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
I'm running around but there's no place to hide
I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided
Why can't they forgive me these demons inside
Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up
I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided
How can it be that you're ready for love

How can it be that you're ready for love ...

sad.... i feel the pain within this poem, its well writen and i look forward to more. i just hope that this pain will subside

awww thats a very emotional poem. well written too Hiei ^^

For a second i thought you like wrote it out twice but i like how you edited the previous verses in the last two. good job ;)

that....was......really nice...i liked it.....alot....:cry:

It was very good. I can feel the sadness that you display in your words. It's a really good poem and I hope to see more from you, hopefully with a little less unhappiness in your words. ^_^

Truly a fantasic piece of work! The emotion of sadness in this poem is captured very well! I'm looking forward to more of you work and I imagine this pain was sort of like the proverbial calm before the storm. But that which has a beginning also has and ending! Excellent job!

Very touching,good choice of words and flows quite well when i read it.Keep up the fine effort.

That was a really good poem. I could feel so much emotion as I was reading it. It was happy and sad all at the same time. I look forward to reading your next one.