ready for love

hiei9957 · Jan 26, 2007, 08:27 AM

Ready For Love"

You took a piece of my heart
I never thought that this could fall apart
You said you fell in love
And this was more than I had ever been afraid of
Another life
Another happy ending cuts like a knife
Another place, another time
Another hand to touch, another sun to shine

You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
I'm running around but there's no place to hide
I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided
Why can't they forgive me these demons inside
Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up
I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided
How can it be that you're ready for love

Ready for love ...

How can it be that you're ready for love .....

Time will tell
A single day had helped me break this spell
Don't want to be alone
When will I be understood when is my kingdom to come
Another boy, another life
Another happy ending, and I'll be alive
Another place, another time
Another hand to touch, another sun to shine

You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
I'm running around but there's no place to hide
I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided
Why can't they forgive me these demons inside
Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up
I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided
How can it be that you're ready for love

How can it be that you're ready for love ...

god of death · Jan 26, 2007, 08:30 AM

sad.... i feel the pain within this poem, its well writen and i look forward to more. i just hope that this pain will subside

Sazzy · Jan 26, 2007, 08:33 AM

awww thats a very emotional poem. well written too Hiei ^^

For a second i thought you like wrote it out twice but i like how you edited the previous verses in the last two. good job

Aiora · Jan 26, 2007, 08:41 AM

that....was......really nice...i liked it.....alot....

Self Loving Carnage · Jan 26, 2007, 08:44 AM

It was very good. I can feel the sadness that you display in your words. It's a really good poem and I hope to see more from you, hopefully with a little less unhappiness in your words. ^_^

BlueFox1 · Jan 26, 2007, 09:18 AM

Truly a fantasic piece of work! The emotion of sadness in this poem is captured very well! I'm looking forward to more of you work and I imagine this pain was sort of like the proverbial calm before the storm. But that which has a beginning also has and ending! Excellent job!

JefferyXie · Jan 26, 2007, 04:19 PM

Very touching,good choice of words and flows quite well when i read it.Keep up the fine effort.

CherryBlossom18 · Jan 26, 2007, 07:30 PM

That was a really good poem. I could feel so much emotion as I was reading it. It was happy and sad all at the same time. I look forward to reading your next one.

Naruku · Jan 26, 2007, 09:59 PM

[quote=hiei9957;444572]Ready For Love"

You took a piece of my heart
I never thought that this could fall apart
You said you fell in love
And this was more than I had ever been afraid of
Another life
Another happy ending cuts like a knife
Another place, another time
Another hand to touch, another sun to shine

You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
I'm running around but there's no place to hide
I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided
Why can't they forgive me these demons inside
Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up
I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided
How can it be that you're ready for love

Ready for love ...

How can it be that you're ready for love .....

Time will tell
A single day had helped me break this spell
Don't want to be alone
When will I be understood when is my kingdom to come
Another boy, another life
Another happy ending, and I'll be alive
Another place, another time
Another hand to touch, another sun to shine

You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
I'm running around but there's no place to hide
I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided
Why can't they forgive me these demons inside
Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up
I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided
How can it be that you're ready for love

hmmm!Your pain brings me pleasure without end,but seriously its a beautiful poem and sorry that I'm too sick and twisted to feel any pain from that poem exept pure enjoyment and happieness from reading it.hehahaha!

*Kasai* · Jan 27, 2007, 12:45 AM

Please, no double postings.

*Ky-lyrra* · Jan 27, 2007, 12:46 AM

I love the poem it has such mixed feelings in it. I loved reading it and I hope that you keep up the good work. Loved it 10/10!!

Jan 26, 2007, 08:27 AM	#1 (permalink)
hiei9957 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Home Posts: 535 Thanks: 4 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 7,837	ready for love Ready For Love" You took a piece of my heart I never thought that this could fall apart You said you fell in love And this was more than I had ever been afraid of Another life Another happy ending cuts like a knife Another place, another time Another hand to touch, another sun to shine You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded I'm running around but there's no place to hide I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided Why can't they forgive me these demons inside Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided How can it be that you're ready for love Ready for love ... How can it be that you're ready for love ..... Time will tell A single day had helped me break this spell Don't want to be alone When will I be understood when is my kingdom to come Another boy, another life Another happy ending, and I'll be alive Another place, another time Another hand to touch, another sun to shine You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded I'm running around but there's no place to hide I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided Why can't they forgive me these demons inside Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided How can it be that you're ready for love How can it be that you're ready for love ... __________________ Tanks zyta
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god of death Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: brimstone graveyard Posts: 156 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 362	Re: ready for love sad.... i feel the pain within this poem, its well writen and i look forward to more. i just hope that this pain will subside __________________ I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness...... http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php this is my site come and see me there sometime!
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Sazzy Member of 22 yr old Club Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: In my imagination restricted by British Society! Posts: 1,807 Thanks: 7 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts Credits: 33,020	Re: ready for love awww thats a very emotional poem. well written too Hiei ^^ For a second i thought you like wrote it out twice but i like how you edited the previous verses in the last two. good job __________________ FAVOURITE THREADS EXPLAIN why, or risk an infraction. *Will no long use any signatures.. only on forums that appreciate my effort.*
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Aiora x.Broken.x.Tragedy.x Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In your fridge Posts: 606 Thanks: 3 Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts Credits: 5,010	Re: ready for love that....was......really nice...i liked it.....alot.... __________________ God Forgives, I Don't..
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Self Loving Carnage Demon Loving Only Himself Join Date: May 2006 Location: I dislike stalkers. Posts: 95 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,006	Re: ready for love It was very good. I can feel the sadness that you display in your words. It's a really good poem and I hope to see more from you, hopefully with a little less unhappiness in your words. ^_^ __________________ You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.
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Jan 26, 2007, 09:18 AM	#6 (permalink)
BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,176	Re: ready for love Truly a fantasic piece of work! The emotion of sadness in this poem is captured very well! I'm looking forward to more of you work and I imagine this pain was sort of like the proverbial calm before the storm. But that which has a beginning also has and ending! Excellent job! __________________
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Jan 26, 2007, 04:19 PM	#7 (permalink)
JefferyXie Shichibukai Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 613 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Re: ready for love Very touching,good choice of words and flows quite well when i read it.Keep up the fine effort.
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,376	Re: ready for love That was a really good poem. I could feel so much emotion as I was reading it. It was happy and sad all at the same time. I look forward to reading your next one. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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Jan 26, 2007, 09:59 PM	#9 (permalink)
Naruku Newbie Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 26 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	[quote=hiei9957;444572]Ready For Love" You took a piece of my heart I never thought that this could fall apart You said you fell in love And this was more than I had ever been afraid of Another life Another happy ending cuts like a knife Another place, another time Another hand to touch, another sun to shine You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded I'm running around but there's no place to hide I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided Why can't they forgive me these demons inside Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided How can it be that you're ready for love Ready for love ... How can it be that you're ready for love ..... Time will tell A single day had helped me break this spell Don't want to be alone When will I be understood when is my kingdom to come Another boy, another life Another happy ending, and I'll be alive Another place, another time Another hand to touch, another sun to shine You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded I'm running around but there's no place to hide I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided Why can't they forgive me these demons inside Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided How can it be that you're ready for love hmmm!Your pain brings me pleasure without end,but seriously its a beautiful poem and sorry that I'm too sick and twisted to feel any pain from that poem exept pure enjoyment and happieness from reading it.hehahaha! __________________ *Naraku* Last edited by Kasai; Jan 27, 2007 at 12:45 AM.
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Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	Re: ready for love Please, no double postings. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Ky-lyrra Lost In My Own World Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida Posts: 1,531 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 5,069	Re: ready for love I love the poem it has such mixed feelings in it. I loved reading it and I hope that you keep up the good work. Loved it 10/10!! __________________ ™Soon To Be Mother™ Thanks For The Tag Aiora!
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