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    ready for love

    Ready For Love"

    You took a piece of my heart
    I never thought that this could fall apart
    You said you fell in love
    And this was more than I had ever been afraid of
    Another life
    Another happy ending cuts like a knife
    Another place, another time
    Another hand to touch, another sun to shine

    You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
    I'm running around but there's no place to hide
    I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided
    Why can't they forgive me these demons inside
    Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
    My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up
    I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided
    How can it be that you're ready for love

    Ready for love ...

    How can it be that you're ready for love .....

    Time will tell
    A single day had helped me break this spell
    Don't want to be alone
    When will I be understood when is my kingdom to come
    Another boy, another life
    Another happy ending, and I'll be alive
    Another place, another time
    Another hand to touch, another sun to shine

    You got me deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
    I'm running around but there's no place to hide
    I start to talk in my sleep, our souls have divided
    Why can't they forgive me these demons inside
    Deeper than deep and I'm constantly blinded
    My heart starts to shiver for I was letting up
    I start to talk in my sleep, cause our souls have divided
    How can it be that you're ready for love

    How can it be that you're ready for love ...

    Tanks zyta

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    Re: ready for love

    sad.... i feel the pain within this poem, its well writen and i look forward to more. i just hope that this pain will subside
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    Re: ready for love

    awww thats a very emotional poem. well written too Hiei ^^

    For a second i thought you like wrote it out twice but i like how you edited the previous verses in the last two. good job
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    Re: ready for love

    that....was......really nice...i liked it.....alot....


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    Re: ready for love

    It was very good. I can feel the sadness that you display in your words. It's a really good poem and I hope to see more from you, hopefully with a little less unhappiness in your words. ^_^
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    Re: ready for love

    Truly a fantasic piece of work! The emotion of sadness in this poem is captured very well! I'm looking forward to more of you work and I imagine this pain was sort of like the proverbial calm before the storm. But that which has a beginning also has and ending! Excellent job!

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    Re: ready for love

    Very touching,good choice of words and flows quite well when i read it.Keep up the fine effort.

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    Re: ready for love

    That was a really good poem. I could feel so much emotion as I was reading it. It was happy and sad all at the same time. I look forward to reading your next one.
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