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    Real... (Keeping what's not there)

    Keep it real...

    What is real anyway?
    Could the people and things
    we interact with just be figments
    of our imaginations?

    Real...

    We can smell it, touch it,
    see it and hear it, but
    is it genuinely real? You can
    take a picture and show it off
    and someone will say you photoshopped it.

    So, is it real?

    Aliens don't exist, yet we
    see things in the skies every night
    and claim it was real. Only to
    be told some smelly gas made us think so.
    Maybe the aliens think we don't exist...

    Real talk...

    How can one keep it real,
    when one doesn't know what is truly
    real? Your eyes can deceive you
    everyone pre-judges and everyone
    has selective hearing...
    Is any of this real?
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    Re: Real... (Keeping what's not there)

    here's some thing real. where do we go when we die? Do we end up going to a heaven or hell, or is it all blank and darkness? you odnt have to answer it. But I love the poem keep pu the good work! Can't wait to see more~
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    Re: Real... (Keeping what's not there)

    Mm, I like this poem. It's unique and complex in a way. Keep up the good work. ^_^

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    Re: Real... (Keeping what's not there)

    Hmmm... this poem has something... It's just nice to read and it leads you to thinking of things real and iluzional. And if it really matters if something is real... It reminds me a poem I wrote as a child, where I said that I just don't care if love is real or just an iluzion. You just have to enjoy it.

    Well you have better, but it was grea to read this one- always nice to see something new from you ^^ And I'm looking forward for more as always ^^

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    Re: Real... (Keeping what's not there)

    Hmm... you put a few examples to the things which is related.. but i think keeping it real is alot wider than that ^^

    But a nice poem though...simple and easily understandable.. nice

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    Re: Real... (Keeping what's not there)

    Wow! Thanks to all of you for commenting on my poem! I'm glad you all liked it so much. Special thanks to Lasura and RayMe for taking the time to read my work on a daily level. I really appreciate it! ^_^


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