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    Reality?

    1 am and I'm still up , the creek in
    the floor ,the scrape on the wall,
    blood coming from the wall's ,is it real?
    or is it a dream i do not know, shadows
    talk to me now.

    Screams are heard ,blood splatters
    to the wall, brain particles seen flying
    in the air ,the smell of blood that has
    been sitting there for a while as the
    hours pass from the horror that could
    have been then again might not have.

    Voices telling me it will be OK , the head
    ache goes away ,the haziness goes away
    as i sit at the table laughing out loud as thoughts
    cross my mind that would seem insane to most
    but make since to me.

    Heavy breathing, glowing eyes , drool from
    the mouth , the foul stench of hell , it comes
    for me now or am i sleeping still in my bed?,
    i look up nothing is there ,cold chills go down
    my back, as i wonder if i will live or die.

    Day's pass as sit there dreaming or am i? as the laughter
    of madness surrounds me and the door closes and never again
    do i see freedom as the tears of hate look down to me for the thing's
    i did or did i? there body's being torn asunder as the beast Lay's in wait
    or was it me?

    this poem is about how reality can be a double edged sword
    for those who loose there sanity and cant tell whats real
    or not . All most like a nightmare but it's not because its real
    what they do. comments and suggestions welcomed
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Dec 03, 2006 at 01:43 PM.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Reality?

    Hey Bro! I know it's been a while since I last talked to you, but your poems are also! I need to get inspired and write a new one myself! Keep up the outstanding job Bro!!!

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    Re: Reality?

    i will and thansk and cant wait to read some of your poems as well
    i know i used the wrong wording for somethigs but i am going to go back and fix those now
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Reality?

    That was really good, and you're right it does remind me of my story. You did a really good job connecting the two. Hmm I might talk to you about this later. I liked it a lot, though. Very very nice job, I thought it was awesome. The scary effect was great!!
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    That was a very dark mysterious poem. It's fit for halloween,but it was still good.
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    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: Reality?

    oh my gosh! cool poem big brother! I love it. It made me think but I'm not sure of what. Its cool! keep it up!
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