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    Reality

    This one is for two of my friends here on AO Shinigami's_Angel and Cherryblossom18! I also have experinced this feeling as well! I don't care about critiques, but if you have felt this pain feel free to comment.




    Reality


    The pain of losing something or someone dear is hard,
    you lye awake at night tossing and turning wondering.
    How something so tragic like this can happen to you,
    Never knowing what curve life will throw at you next.


    Words and emotions transpire that are not meant to hurt,
    yet the eternal bond that is shared among family fades.
    The loss seems to have awakened the true since of reality,
    Fear of being alone, scared, and confused takes over you.


    You hear a voice saying that you’re not alone in this world
    Friends trying their best to comfort you in your time of need.
    Your world slowly being to revolve and the void start to close,
    Life begins anew and the pain starts to fade leaving no traces.


    Remembering the one whose life ended reminds us about life,
    not that is should be feared, but a gift that should be cherished.
    Knowing that each day a choice is made and we shouldn’t regret,
    because life is too precious to be spent wondering what could’ve.
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    This is Amazing Fox!! I'm left speachless here.I sooo loved it!! Your words speak such truth.And thanks for writting this for all of us! Awesome job as always Fox!!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Thank you Angel for the comment on this poem! I know that everything will be okay in time! I too know the pain of losing someone dear! If you need me I'll be here!

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    Re: Reality

    wow, so true. it has touched me. im lost quite often and i have lost many in my time. you have talent as a writer, and i would love to see more.
    *your new fan*
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    god of death: Thank you for the comment you left on my poem! This poem is more from the heart, I mean my friends that I wrote it for have and are going through this and I've lost two special people in my life as well. So while helping a friend through a hard time I decided to put into word! Now that you're a fan I hope that I do not disappoint!

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    no need to worry about dissappointing me, im a writer too, a poet true to his heart. i know that this poem was from your heart and im glad your able to express it like this.
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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    Thanks for the ecouragement god of death! I'm glad that you liked my poem.

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    Re: Reality

    A few spelling errors and punctuation are needed. Punctuation kept the flow off, which in turn kept me from actually getting a feel of the poem.
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