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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: wherever they will take me in
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![]() ![]() Credits: 110 | Reality True beauty lies within these corpses As a white flower blooms within a heart; Being lost in this emptiness, I have forgotten what put it apart From all the rest and forced to grow in such waste. And yet, this defiant little flower pushed thru Into this cruel and cold environment. What heartache it must be to be all alone in this world too. If only it knew the lies it had to take To feed its dying roots...But what could it do? So desperate to survive, it drank the poisoned water and Now it wilts before my eyes; Such a tragic mistake Once like this white flower, all innocent and true, But now reality hits and I... I don't understand
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![]() ![]() Credits: 322 | Re: Reality Not bad, Reaper. I like the whole idea of a virtuous flower growing from death. This civilization is just a decaying giant filled with rot and poisoned minds. I like the ending. Once again not bad. ![]() |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,051 | Re: Reality The last line, the stumble, captured my attention ^^ And how you linked it with the flower, tasting poison to survive, yes that really described reality. How cruel ![]() |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,336 | Re: Reality Nice poem it explained some parts od reality really well. good job.
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