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    The Reason

    you fell away
    what more can i say

    the feelings evolved
    i want to let it out

    i can't replace
    my screaming face

    so many words
    can't describe my self

    i can't relate
    to a happy state

    i feel my imotions running through me
    like the blood through my vains

    through my years
    i can't believe what flows in my ears

    it's something i might regret
    and something you will not forget

    with your act
    there will be no pact

    i opened a new page
    a page filled with rage

    do you understand
    the reason i can't stand

    why i cry
    and wish to die

    why i walk the streets alone
    and accepting pains i've never known

    why i keep singing this song
    and why i try to make my self shown

    there is a reason for all of this
    a reason i despise and hate
    and the reason is you .....
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: The Reason

    so many words
    can't describe my self
    this line didn't rhyme, but still the peom was pretty kool.

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    Re: The Reason

    hey that was really great, your a great writer. keep it up!
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    Re: The Reason

    Combine verses to make stanzas. Capitilization would be nice.
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