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Reply With Quotenice poem its really good so keep up the good work ok hope to see more from u
She thinks I'm all that.
She thinks I don't admire her.
She believes I soar when I don't sleep with her.
She assumes I use her, and not comprehend her complex emotions.
But the truth is,
I love her, otherwise I would've gotten someone "better".
I accept her the way she is,
and I love her regardless of her brutal past.
I told her, it's not always about sex.
I don't always try to get her to bed.
I like to talk, to discuss.
To talk about our pains, to hold her in my arms ... to rid her of her pain.
It's not always sex I seek,
it's the enlightenment I want to experience.
To feel passion, not lust.
To love, and not need.
To give and not take.
That's what I am trying to do for her.
Because I know I lover her.
Please tell her this.
nice poem its really good so keep up the good work ok hope to see more from u
Hmmm... i would say your past works are much better rave...you stopped writing for some time have you... must have rusted a bit..
xD jk ^^
Its a good poem... ^^ keep up the good work ..
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aww rushil i belive i know who that lucky girl is ....
and i bet any girl would to be loved by u as much as u do for her ^^
great poem ... hope she enjoys it
Last edited by equinn; Oct 19, 2007 at 05:29 AM.
This is a wonderful poem. I don't read poetry much anymore but I like this one. You did a great job.
thats messed up dude lol
is it the chick that thinks ur doing these things in the poem or is it someone else?
Uhh ... is the poem good?
Anyways it's messed up because that's exactly the idea presented in the poem, and the reson being this is boring because I haven't written in a long time.
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