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    The reason I stick to you.

    She thinks I'm all that.
    She thinks I don't admire her.
    She believes I soar when I don't sleep with her.
    She assumes I use her, and not comprehend her complex emotions.

    But the truth is,
    I love her, otherwise I would've gotten someone "better".
    I accept her the way she is,
    and I love her regardless of her brutal past.
    I told her, it's not always about sex.
    I don't always try to get her to bed.
    I like to talk, to discuss.
    To talk about our pains, to hold her in my arms ... to rid her of her pain.
    It's not always sex I seek,
    it's the enlightenment I want to experience.
    To feel passion, not lust.
    To love, and not need.
    To give and not take.
    That's what I am trying to do for her.
    Because I know I lover her.

    Please tell her this.

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    Re: The reason I stick to you.

    nice poem its really good so keep up the good work ok hope to see more from u

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    Re: The reason I stick to you.

    Hmmm... i would say your past works are much better rave... you stopped writing for some time have you... must have rusted a bit.. xD jk ^^

    Its a good poem... ^^ keep up the good work ..

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    Re: The reason I stick to you.

    aww rushil i belive i know who that lucky girl is ....

    and i bet any girl would to be loved by u as much as u do for her ^^

    great poem ... hope she enjoys it
    Last edited by equinn; Oct 19, 2007 at 05:29 AM.

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    Re: The reason I stick to you.

    This is a wonderful poem. I don't read poetry much anymore but I like this one. You did a great job.

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    Re: The reason I stick to you.

    thats messed up dude lol
    is it the chick that thinks ur doing these things in the poem or is it someone else?

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    Re: The reason I stick to you.

    Uhh ... is the poem good?

    Anyways it's messed up because that's exactly the idea presented in the poem, and the reson being this is boring because I haven't written in a long time.

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