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Reflection
Walking down in the dark alley…
The rain pours down continuously…
Left and right my eyes glare
Hoping that no one will dare to stare
Step by step I awkwardly walked…
Like a lonely soul that wandered…
Yearning for something I never knew…
The feeling that is oh so new…
My body is now so soaked…
My soul is now so drenched…
With a bucket of tears I shed…
With the realization I’m misled…
Looking down on the flooded ground…
I’m hearing some kind of sound…
A sound so familiar and true…
A sound that’s sad and blue…
My heart beats rapidly…
My head aches hardly…
My hands are shaking madly…
Looking at the reflection on the ground…
I saw a girl who makes a sobbing sound…
Her black eyes filled with blood-colored tears…
It seems she suffered the pain for so many years…
Her pupils in the eyes are so dark…
I don’t even see any trace of spark…
With no trace of hope and faith…
Looked like a faint-hearted saint…
Looking at the girl in my reflection…
Made me feel intense exasperation…
How dare the being that did this to me…
I will now make that being see…
The real and true reflection of me…
The monster that lies beneath…
This is my second poem...
well... thanks for reading.
i'm also open for opinions and criticisms...thanks...
Last edited by raja_psyche; Jul 27, 2006 at 01:22 AM.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
Really? This is your second poem? I can't believe you.... You are good, write more my friend^^
Carve an amble now,
Saying that the day's still bright,
And let's play with time.
i like thi poem it speaks of tagady as kid from an adult
who never lost her child like innocnet .and then to say your dark side
has yet to been as a warning to those who would hurt you very intresting
the blood the girl shed was good symbolism for the love the chld lost through
the anguish of her pain. i like this poem alot very awesome
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
^_^
oh thankies all for your opinion, i really do appreciate!
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
it's a nice and sad poem....
i really, really like it.... ^__^
^_^. wow thanks all for all your opinions... well, it has been raining so hard... so i'll try to write a poem... again... heheh!
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
Sonata of a Slave
I want to be somebody free
Unchained with my destiny
I want to live my life on my own
Without anyone dictating their own…
I want to be somebody free
I want to reach for the clouds on the sky
I want to fly with the birds so high
I want to see the world beneath me…
I want to be somebody free
I want to play with the soil of the earth
I want to feel the warmth of the sand
As it flows down from my hand
I want to be somebody free
I long to bathe in the deepest blue sea
I want to swim with the fishes with glee…
I want to be happy as I can be
I want to be somebody free
I want feel what anyone could feel
Anger and joy, triumph and failure
Something that is somehow real and true…
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
nice. with pictures included. ^^lll baa~ *wave*
good ones~! XD pretty!
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