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    Reflection?

    This is who I am
    Of what I do
    But, they alway's say
    I look like you

    Same face
    Same eye's
    Same tear's
    Same cries

    The only thing
    Is we are not alike
    The only difference
    Is I am alive

    What you really are
    Just a reflection
    A mirror
    Of rejection

    You'll never
    Look like me
    You'll never
    Be like me

    You'll never
    Be Free

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    Re: Reflection?

    Cool... I like it! But sort of confused on the meaning. Are you talking about your reflection in a mirror? That's what I thought anyway. ^_^ It's good. Can't wait to read more!

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    Re: Reflection?

    now I'm not sure of the meaning, but are you talking about being compared to someone else as you progress in life? If you are talking about that then I understand entirely! Because my whole military career I've been compared to my father countless times! It doesn't bother me though because my father is a great guy, but we are different in a lot of things! Overall good poem homey!

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    Re: Reflection?

    Thanks vato, lol, it has a meaning but you guy's got to figure it out in your head, its like a riddle but a poem way, I know the answer to it too.

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    Re: Reflection?

    i really like this poem, my favorite one from you so far. keep up the good work!!!

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    Re: Reflection?

    Are you possibly talking about the duality of the human being?
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Reflection?

    Quote Originally Posted by FLawEdmiNd View Post
    Are you possibly talking about the duality of the human being?
    umm no not exactly not speaking about a human duality, it's sounds more like a riddle than a poem and I got answer for it, I think lol.

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