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    Reflection

    As I look into your eyes
    I see the future ahead
    I see evil conquering good
    But I'd rather see the other way instead

    I see your armor worn out
    Telling me all the battles gone through
    But there's much more ahead
    Many other missions to do

    Hair much too long
    Showing how long it's been
    Staying out here in war
    Committing too many mortal sins

    Loss of the smile
    All the happiness drained out
    Because of what you've seen and heard
    Cries of terror all about

    Sword in your hand
    Prepared for what is soon
    Though it may not be 'till later
    Not until the next full moon

    As I look away
    From the watery reflection
    It's time to change the future
    Offer my land new protection

    Writer's Notes: Well, I just though this up when I was kinda bored. Not that much to say, just, thanks for reading.

    They say, "I will die for my country." I never hear them say, "I will kill for my country."

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    Re: Reflection

    Wow this poem was scary and depressing but I loved it anyway! I like sad poems and this was wonderful! Hope to see more! *~meow~*



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    Re: Reflection

    cool poem dude .scary and sad but great work i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!WOOHOO GO GO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!very good description BTW.♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Reflection

    Thanks you two. I'm glad you liked it. =) Heh, I didn't know it was scary really, oops...=P

    They say, "I will die for my country." I never hear them say, "I will kill for my country."

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