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    Inside the mountains are old creeks that run in circles over the floors of low-ceilinged caves.The fish in these waters are white and transculent; you can see a pink haze of organs beneath the skin.Where there should be eyes are bulges that do not move.On the walls are white spiders like grey tight buttons of surgical cotton suspended on long hairy legs.There are white beetles;too,scurrying through the hills of black bat dung.


    I have always been suspicious of these caves because walls crumble easilly under your fingertips,there is no moisture in the air and it smells like balloons.The water smells like oranges but have no taste.Nothing you do here makes any sound.


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    Re: Reflections in the Eye of the raven

    Is a fantasy story
    very good 1...



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    Re: Reflections in the Eye of the raven

    i like where this story is going and the details were very good
    i cant wait to see what you find when exploring the place
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Reflections in the Eye of the raven

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    i like where this story is going and the details were very good
    i cant wait to see what you find when exploring the place
    or exploring ur on mind yeah thats really good.



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    Re: Reflections in the Eye of the raven

    I REALY LIKE IT!!!!! wow exalent detail...i could just see it in my head...BUT WRITE SOME MMOE OK??????
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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