thats a really nice poem and different than the ones u previously wrote!! i like it!!
The art of your beauty smiles upon me.
I identify you as destiny for greater amount of time.
You chose meas your hearted soul fever.
with the amount of time given to should lever.
Please keep on progressing and never give up on me.
Till' the time i stay up late i shall cherish you with joy.
Use the time wisely to conserve quantity of fulfillment
I will heel over your needs of pain and delight company.
Support the ones that are indeed for self-assurance.
Consume the efforts to comfort my supportive life.
Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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thats a really nice poem and different than the ones u previously wrote!! i like it!!
the worst feeling is not Death, its knowing that you aren't needed,
that you are alone in this world, and that you no longer have a reason to live...
well thats my understanding of writing all sorts of different kinda of poem that attracts anyone for the poems i write in a natural way i would never give up such beautiful talent in me anyways there is still more to come in the next week ok well hope you read it again and manage it just fine.![]()
Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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^__^ hey nice poem i really enjoyed reading itgood job!
*~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*
dark1angel (May 17, 2010)
yay!! more poems!! i lost my motivation to write them anymore... im so sad...:![]()
the worst feeling is not Death, its knowing that you aren't needed,
that you are alone in this world, and that you no longer have a reason to live...
in time will come naturally the art and gift of poetry words and i hope you will enjoy it when you have the chance to write more and im well fonded with my poetry work because it brings life in the mind and spirit so yeah im well bonded with poems i enjoy more then anything else i think in my own opinion.![]()
Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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