In regards to love

FLawEdmiNd · Oct 25, 2006, 02:49 PM

In regards to love

Have you ever questioned why you love?

Ever wondered why we can love or why we want to?

Asked yourself, ‘It hurts so much but I can’t stop’

Pain is love in this world and pleasure is a mixture of both… Or lust

Rhyme without reason is lust,

Merely a dance of passion and whispering words meaningless affections

The cure to the pains of love,

Lust is the enemy yet it is our only salvation from…

The joyous pains of love…

It comes in many forms,

Unrequited, unrealized, unreturned…

It breaks our heart everyday,

And still we seek love… With lust caught in our eyes

Why?

Many ask that,

We cannot help it; it merely flows from our being, left unchecked

Questioning love is a part of loving; you can’t fully love a person without questioning your own motives…

Now when you say you love someone think this…

‘Do I truly love you?’

I’ll leave you with these words…

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<.<

LostbutFound · Oct 25, 2006, 03:13 PM

Beatifuley spoken like atrue poet*claps hands* that was great

darkflames · Oct 25, 2006, 03:23 PM

it was very good! nicely job i must say.. you should make more.

*CherryBlossom18* · Oct 25, 2006, 04:24 PM

I really liked your poem. It made so much sense. Keep up the good work and I would like to read more.

Oct 25, 2006, 02:49 PM	#1 (permalink)
FLawEdmiNd Otaku Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: winnipeg Posts: 483 Thanks: 1 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Credits: 10,360	In regards to love In regards to love Have you ever questioned why you love? Ever wondered why we can love or why we want to? Asked yourself, ‘It hurts so much but I can’t stop’ Pain is love in this world and pleasure is a mixture of both… Or lust Rhyme without reason is lust, Merely a dance of passion and whispering words meaningless affections The cure to the pains of love, Lust is the enemy yet it is our only salvation from… The joyous pains of love… It comes in many forms, Unrequited, unrealized, unreturned… It breaks our heart everyday, And still we seek love… With lust caught in our eyes Why? Many ask that, We cannot help it; it merely flows from our being, left unchecked Questioning love is a part of loving; you can’t fully love a person without questioning your own motives… Now when you say you love someone think this… ‘Do I truly love you?’ I’ll leave you with these words… ------------- <.< __________________ AO - WE ARE THE iNTERWEB
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,616	Re: In regards to love I really liked your poem. It made so much sense. Keep up the good work and I would like to read more.
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