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    Re: Regretful

    Awesome job on the poem bro. It almost made me cry cause it was so emotional. It's really sad to have a friend you become so close to leave cause I've had freinds like that, but you keep that hope in the back of your mind hoping someday they'll return. I can't wait to read your next one.
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    Cherryblossom18: thanks for the awesome comment and thanks for being the wonderful understanding person you are! I'm glad I got the chance to meet you!

    Angel:*hugs* Where would I be without you? I can answer that question absolutely lost!! I'm glad that you liked my poem and I appreciate the wonderful comment from a wonderful Angel!

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    Wow! The poem speaks for itself. It has words that a reader can easily comprehend and understand. The words that you chose did not hinder the reader to visualize everthing you wanted to convey. The imagery interests me also. This poem you made makes the reader visualize the reality. There are things that are changed by time. We would never know that the things that are dearest now... will be lost somewhat tomorrow.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    eeeee huacha, you got some good words in these poem its. really good keep it up ese!

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    raja_psyche:thanks for the wonderful comment you left, I really tried hard to capture the feeling of losing a friend and putting it into words. Thanks buddy for reading my poem!

    HellKnight: I promise I will continue to write poems and I glad that you liked my poem as well! I do my best to keep it homey!

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    Re: Regretful

    Nice poem, it's a great expression of the global pain people feel when certain people in there lives leave them, great articulation of feeling.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Thanks for the awesome comment FLawEdmiNd! I tried my best to capture a feeling that most people experience in life, weather it be losing a close friend or that someone special!

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