+ Reply to Thread
Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast
Results 1 to 8 of 9

Thread: Rejuvenation

  1. #1
    Legendary Otaku Happy Pill Champion, Monkey Mayhem Champion NeoDeath90 may be famous one day NeoDeath90 may be famous one day NeoDeath90's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2007
    Location
    Somers NY
    Posts
    1,090
    Thanks
    19
    Thanked 99 Times in 93 Posts

    Rejuvenation

    A little poem about my return to the site after a couple months' break.

    The fire does flicker and eventually die
    The smoldering embers, the closing of eyes

    The breath is cast out and the heartbeat, it slows
    And permanent sleep rushes from head to toe

    As the burning sensation numbs and subsides
    The once blazing life starts to ebb like the tides

    The smoke billows forth from the pile of coals
    Yet the sparks remain vivid with unfulfilled goals

    And so, from the ashes, new life starts to form
    A towering inferno, like Hell's frightening storms

    With a music like cry, the babe spreads its wings
    The newly born phoenix gets ready to sing

    The cycle remains unbroken and strong
    Life and Death dancing to an eternal song
    Why hello there!

  2. #2
    Newbie Lelouch vi Britannia is off to a good start Lelouch vi Britannia's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Location
    C's world
    Posts
    45
    Thanks
    3
    Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts

    Re: Rejuvination

    This is a poem a friend and i worked on while she was in iraq fighting:
    Title:Lady I Know
    There’s this lady I know, she’s been through so much.

    She’s been to hell many times and back, yet her flame of courage has not died down.

    Glowing bright and strong in the blackest of nights, she lives on.

    She has strengths that amaze men.

    She smiles when she wants to scream.

    She sings when she wants to cry.

    She goes without so her family can have.

    She loves unconditionally.

    If there is one flaw in this woman, it’s that she doesn’t know her worth.

    This lady I know has shown me the power of woman.

    This lady I know is my mother.

  3. #3
    Banned beast may be famous one day beast may be famous one day beast's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
    Location
    Michigan United States
    Posts
    1,499
    Thanks
    411
    Thanked 132 Times in 126 Posts

    Re: Rejuvination

    Good Job Lelouch. I hope she is okay fighting in Iraq can be difficult. I know.

  4. #4
    Femmebot Rehab Colt Crouse Champion, Bookworm Champion, Hangman Champion, Connect 2 Champion Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Location
    Friendly Fridley
    Posts
    1,477
    Thanks
    124
    Thanked 140 Times in 121 Posts

    Re: Rejuvination

    Um, why did you post your poem in a reply to neodeath's poem.. eh Lelouch?

    Either way I thought the poem was real deep and exquisitely worded... a little more than what I expected from a poem about leaving a website for a couple months.
    ... Not Ever Again...

  5. #5
    Newbie Lelouch vi Britannia is off to a good start Lelouch vi Britannia's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Location
    C's world
    Posts
    45
    Thanks
    3
    Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts

    Re: Rejuvination

    it was on accident and i didnt know where eles to put it. so i just posted it cause it was in a poems thread. but didnt mean to post in in neodeath's. but thanks for the compliment...

  6. #6
    Banned neko nathaniel is off to a good start neko nathaniel's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2009
    Location
    springfield ohio
    Posts
    131
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts

    Re: Rejuvination

    good good i like that poem was really good lol .................,,,

  7. #7
    Legendary Otaku Happy Pill Champion, Monkey Mayhem Champion NeoDeath90 may be famous one day NeoDeath90 may be famous one day NeoDeath90's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2007
    Location
    Somers NY
    Posts
    1,090
    Thanks
    19
    Thanked 99 Times in 93 Posts

    Re: Rejuvination

    Quote Originally Posted by Lelouch vi Britannia View Post
    it was on accident and i didnt know where eles to put it. so i just posted it cause it was in a poems thread. but didnt mean to post in in neodeath's. but thanks for the compliment...
    You just post a poem as a new thread, my friend.

    I'm a bit honored you wanted to share your pem with my own, although the compliments are a bit confusing, as I'm not sure who they go to.
    Why hello there!

  8. #8
    Femmebot Rehab Colt Crouse Champion, Bookworm Champion, Hangman Champion, Connect 2 Champion Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Location
    Friendly Fridley
    Posts
    1,477
    Thanks
    124
    Thanked 140 Times in 121 Posts

    Re: Rejuvenation

    my feedback went to you neodeath... the only thing I had to say to anything else was "why?"
    ... Not Ever Again...

+ Reply to Thread
Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts