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    Otaku BrokenLover101 is off to a good start BrokenLover101's Avatar
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    Remains


    Her soul was broken
    Her heart was shattered
    She was left alone
    Torn and tattered

    He didn't care
    Didn't reply to a single email
    But he was always there
    Talking to her through another account

    She didn't want to live
    Thought there wasn't a reason to go on
    Broken inside and out
    The warmth in her eyes.. everything about her was gone

    She was and no longer is the girl he once knew
    And even though she tries to move on
    The hurt and pain still remains
    To this very day
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Remains

    the emotions are very strong on this one. but as you said she is no longer the girl he knew means ther person has out grown the guy
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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    Re: Remains

    This poem reminds me of someone, well this is a beautiful poem, you got the hands of a writer. you keeping writing your very best and I'll be looking forward to read them. this poem also almost gave me a tear.

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