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Oct 29, 2007, 04:41 AM
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 Credits: 9,623 | Remember<the best & nothing less> Remember when I didn't love no one else Remember when I loved you more than myself Remembrance of the best & nothing less... Remember when no one could tear us apart Remember when I gave you my heart Remembrance of the best & nothing less... Remember when I first said "I loved you" Remember when I knew I was "in love with you" Remember I knew the difference between the two Remembrance of the best & nothing less... Remember our makeup after our first fight Remember cause that's when I told you I'll never make you cry Remembrance of the best & nothing less... Remember when I said I'll always tell the truth & never lies Remember cause I said I am not that type of guy Remembrance of the best & nothing less... Remember when I use to get lost in you eyes Remember when we were togther how time seems to always fly Remembrance of the best & nothing less... Remember when I use to wake up to your smile Remember when our love was pure as a new born child Remembrance of the best & nothing less... Remember when our love grew stronger each & everyday Remember when you thought I was going to go, but instead I stayed Remembrance of the best & nothing less... Remember when the shoes was on the other foot Remember do you cause backwards you never looked Remembrance is all I have since the day you left Remembrance of the best & nothing less...
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Oct 29, 2007, 05:11 AM
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Credits: 59,118 | Re: Remember<the best & nothing less> *gasps* wow.. this is quite nice... good job there... nicely written indeed... ^^ love your style here.. keep up the good work.. ^^ |
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Nov 01, 2007, 03:29 PM
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| Angelic  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,182 | Re: Remember<the best & nothing less> omg... this is so beautiful... You've done such a great work... this poem describes love so very well... and I'm so envious of you... I envy because you've managed to capture these moments in your head... I remember nothing like that from the past... and now... I have to wait  And I agree with Ray- the style you've created is very interesting, very nice... Again I can't say: "I'll be waiting for more" Because this is perfect enough to make me feel complete for today... I really, really love this... it's so full of such true love and such sadness... And the main thing is that the memories you describe make the sad part... less sad... Great work Inruto! I salute to you! Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Nov 02, 2007, 09:35 AM
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Credits: 11,816 | Re: Remember<the best & nothing less> Wow... The more I read of your writing the more I enjoy your style. Your a fantastic poet. WHile sometimes you stumble over a word here or there you are really good with flow and layout I guess I would call it. I really enjoy the way you wrote this poem, the way you worded it and the way you can feel it all the way through. It reminded me of one of my relationships. To the T actually. I almost cried.
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Nov 02, 2007, 04:52 PM
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Credits: 696 | Re: Remember<the best & nothing less> Do I know who you are referring to.?? Hmm I wonder?!? ^_^ It is me isn't it < Just kidding> I always told you I loved your writing & I am going to say it again " I love your writing" you are an emotional roller coaster who always wear their heart on their sleeves... In some cases that can be bad, but I think that is why you have a tendecy to write the way you do... And yes, if you had written this for me you better believe the ending would have been different... ^_^ |
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