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Old Oct 29, 2007, 04:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Remember<the best & nothing less>

Remember when I didn't love no one else
Remember when I loved you more than myself

Remembrance of the best & nothing less...

Remember when no one could tear us apart
Remember when I gave you my heart

Remembrance of the best & nothing less...

Remember when I first said "I loved you"
Remember when I knew I was "in love with you"
Remember I knew the difference between the two

Remembrance of the best & nothing less...

Remember our makeup after our first fight
Remember cause that's when I told you I'll never make you cry

Remembrance of the best & nothing less...

Remember when I said I'll always tell the truth & never lies
Remember cause I said I am not that type of guy

Remembrance of the best & nothing less...

Remember when I use to get lost in you eyes
Remember when we were togther how time seems to always fly

Remembrance of the best & nothing less...

Remember when I use to wake up to your smile
Remember when our love was pure as a new born child

Remembrance of the best & nothing less...

Remember when our love grew stronger each & everyday
Remember when you thought I was going to go, but instead I stayed

Remembrance of the best & nothing less...

Remember when the shoes was on the other foot
Remember do you cause backwards you never looked

Remembrance is all I have since the day you left
Remembrance of the best & nothing less...
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Old Oct 29, 2007, 05:11 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Remember<the best & nothing less>

*gasps* wow.. this is quite nice... good job there... nicely written indeed... ^^

love your style here.. keep up the good work.. ^^
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Old Nov 01, 2007, 03:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Remember<the best & nothing less>

omg... this is so beautiful... You've done such a great work... this poem describes love so very well... and I'm so envious of you... I envy because you've managed to capture these moments in your head... I remember nothing like that from the past... and now... I have to wait

And I agree with Ray- the style you've created is very interesting, very nice...
Again I can't say: "I'll be waiting for more" Because this is perfect enough to make me feel complete for today...

I really, really love this... it's so full of such true love and such sadness... And the main thing is that the memories you describe make the sad part... less sad... Great work Inruto! I salute to you! Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old Nov 01, 2007, 05:14 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Remember<the best & nothing less>

Congrats! I love this poem. You did a great job. Keep up the good work! =D
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Old Nov 02, 2007, 09:35 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Remember<the best & nothing less>

Wow... The more I read of your writing the more I enjoy your style. Your a fantastic poet. WHile sometimes you stumble over a word here or there you are really good with flow and layout I guess I would call it. I really enjoy the way you wrote this poem, the way you worded it and the way you can feel it all the way through. It reminded me of one of my relationships. To the T actually. I almost cried.
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Old Nov 02, 2007, 04:52 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Remember<the best & nothing less>

Do I know who you are referring to.?? Hmm I wonder?!? ^_^ It is me isn't it < Just kidding> I always told you I loved your writing & I am going to say it again " I love your writing" you are an emotional roller coaster who always wear their heart on their sleeves... In some cases that can be bad, but I think that is why you have a tendecy to write the way you do...

And yes, if you had written this for me you better believe the ending would have been different... ^_^
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