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Remembering
I smile to disguise the tears that falls from my eyes
Nod my head, to say i always scare of dark
I only want you to spare some time with me.
But you didn't
The world is always or never tired
Just me, my love, just me felt tired.
I tried to forget you,
I tried.......
But i just cannot forget
My world is going to rain
Because the Sun----you, left from my world.
The people suffered,
Because of your leaving.......
Maybe your world is now spring,
But my world is in winter,
cold....
sad.....
no Sun......
Just snow.............
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Re: Remembering
That is so sad *cries*
Wow your good at this..hehe well done, i love it!! i realy do! =^.^=
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Re: Remembering
It's really something when you experience different things in your life. We either become stonger or weaker from it. I really liked how this poem had the tenacity of exploring and displaying one's own feelings by seeing it as their own "world."