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    Remembering

    I smile to disguise the tears that falls from my eyes
    Nod my head, to say i always scare of dark
    I only want you to spare some time with me.
    But you didn't
    The world is always or never tired
    Just me, my love, just me felt tired.

    I tried to forget you,
    I tried.......
    But i just cannot forget

    My world is going to rain
    Because the Sun----you, left from my world.
    The people suffered,
    Because of your leaving.......

    Maybe your world is now spring,
    But my world is in winter,
    cold....
    sad.....
    no Sun......
    Just snow.............
    NaruHina, the cutest couple ever!

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    Re: Remembering

    That is so sad *cries*
    Wow your good at this..hehe well done, i love it!! i realy do! =^.^=
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    Re: Remembering

    It's really something when you experience different things in your life. We either become stonger or weaker from it. I really liked how this poem had the tenacity of exploring and displaying one's own feelings by seeing it as their own "world."

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