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Reply With QuoteWell you say you dont like all of your poems but i like them all.Great job
You left saying I love you
That would only make me remember you
When I see the rain, I see you tear
As I help you wipe them up dear
When I see the stars, I see you remembering me
As we hold hands like we were ment to be
When I see my bed, I remember crying for you
As you came saying don't cry like you always do
When I see the sun, it reminds me of you protecting me
Since you told me I was always the one you wanted to see
When I see my mothers ring, I'm remembering I wanted to marry
As you reply as I do too since your my princess or my fairy
When I see my lips, I still feel that kiss
Even though last time tried we miss
Now when I see you I want to say I love you
As I want you to reply me too
I don't like it that much but I was timing myself so yeah! I lost by one minute!!!!!!! No!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Well you say you dont like all of your poems but i like them all.Great job
Thanks tons! I really thank you but this doesn't that good at all. So I will try better!!!!! So yeah! But thank you!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
A nice poem Kuwi... seemed very sad to me though...
I like the way you've written this poem, I like the things you're saying here, I like the length of the poem, I like every single thing about this poem I guess...
I enjoyed reading it!
Thank you Lasura! I really thank you for your comment!Originally Posted by Lasura
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
I like the poem it was good I think it speaks to all because at one point or another we've all wanted to say "I love you" to some one right?
Thanks to FLawed love the sig.
Pressure makes gems, Ease makes decay.
Yeah you could say that and thank you as well! I really thank you!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Don't mention it but I really would be interested in seeing more of your literary works.
Thanks to FLawed love the sig.
Pressure makes gems, Ease makes decay.
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