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    Remembering you

    You left saying I love you
    That would only make me remember you
    When I see the rain, I see you tear
    As I help you wipe them up dear
    When I see the stars, I see you remembering me
    As we hold hands like we were ment to be
    When I see my bed, I remember crying for you
    As you came saying don't cry like you always do
    When I see the sun, it reminds me of you protecting me
    Since you told me I was always the one you wanted to see
    When I see my mothers ring, I'm remembering I wanted to marry
    As you reply as I do too since your my princess or my fairy
    When I see my lips, I still feel that kiss
    Even though last time tried we miss
    Now when I see you I want to say I love you
    As I want you to reply me too

    I don't like it that much but I was timing myself so yeah! I lost by one minute!!!!!!! No!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Remembering you

    Well you say you dont like all of your poems but i like them all.Great job

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    Thanks tons! I really thank you but this doesn't that good at all. So I will try better!!!!! So yeah! But thank you!
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    Re: Remembering you

    A nice poem Kuwi... seemed very sad to me though...

    I like the way you've written this poem, I like the things you're saying here, I like the length of the poem, I like every single thing about this poem I guess...

    I enjoyed reading it!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Remembering you

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    A nice poem Kuwi... seemed very sad to me though...

    I like the way you've written this poem, I like the things you're saying here, I like the length of the poem, I like every single thing about this poem I guess...

    I enjoyed reading it!
    Thank you Lasura! I really thank you for your comment!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Remembering you

    I like the poem it was good I think it speaks to all because at one point or another we've all wanted to say "I love you" to some one right?

    Thanks to FLawed love the sig.

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    Re: Remembering you

    Quote Originally Posted by Forcefly View Post
    I like the poem it was good I think it speaks to all because at one point or another we've all wanted to say "I love you" to some one right?
    Yeah you could say that and thank you as well! I really thank you!
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    Re: Remembering you

    Don't mention it but I really would be interested in seeing more of your literary works.

    Thanks to FLawed love the sig.

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