Remembering you

KuwiRules145 · Jun 20, 2007, 11:57 AM

You left saying I love you
That would only make me remember you
When I see the rain, I see you tear
As I help you wipe them up dear
When I see the stars, I see you remembering me
As we hold hands like we were ment to be
When I see my bed, I remember crying for you
As you came saying don't cry like you always do
When I see the sun, it reminds me of you protecting me
Since you told me I was always the one you wanted to see
When I see my mothers ring, I'm remembering I wanted to marry
As you reply as I do too since your my princess or my fairy
When I see my lips, I still feel that kiss
Even though last time tried we miss
Now when I see you I want to say I love you
As I want you to reply me too

I don't like it that much but I was timing myself so yeah! I lost by one minute!!!!!!! No!

Little negi sensei · Jun 20, 2007, 12:15 PM

Well you say you dont like all of your poems but i like them all.Great job

KuwiRules145 · Jun 20, 2007, 12:18 PM

Thanks tons! I really thank you but this doesn't that good at all. So I will try better!!!!! So yeah! But thank you!

*Lasura* · Jun 21, 2007, 12:41 AM

A nice poem Kuwi... seemed very sad to me though...

I like the way you've written this poem, I like the things you're saying here, I like the length of the poem, I like every single thing about this poem I guess...

I enjoyed reading it!

KuwiRules145 · Jun 21, 2007, 09:02 AM

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Originally Posted by Lasura

A nice poem Kuwi... seemed very sad to me though...

I like the way you've written this poem, I like the things you're saying here, I like the length of the poem, I like every single thing about this poem I guess...

I enjoyed reading it!

Thank you Lasura! I really thank you for your comment!

Forcefly · Jun 21, 2007, 09:06 AM

I like the poem it was good I think it speaks to all because at one point or another we've all wanted to say "I love you" to some one right?

KuwiRules145 · Jun 21, 2007, 09:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Forcefly

I like the poem it was good I think it speaks to all because at one point or another we've all wanted to say "I love you" to some one right?

Yeah you could say that and thank you as well! I really thank you!

Forcefly · Jun 21, 2007, 09:15 AM

Don't mention it but I really would be interested in seeing more of your literary works.

KuwiRules145 · Jun 21, 2007, 09:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Forcefly

Don't mention it but I really would be interested in seeing more of your literary works.

Yeah!!! I feel unique sorry! But Thank you so much! I thank so YEAH!!!!

iluvmyloser · Jun 24, 2007, 12:45 PM

hey kiwi love the poem has very much feeling in it keep it up foward to seing more bye!♥ da princess

KuwiRules145 · Jun 25, 2007, 08:16 AM

Awwww.....Thank you! I really thank you so much! So Thank you indeed!

Jun 20, 2007, 11:57 AM	#1 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Remembering you You left saying I love you That would only make me remember you When I see the rain, I see you tear As I help you wipe them up dear When I see the stars, I see you remembering me As we hold hands like we were ment to be When I see my bed, I remember crying for you As you came saying don't cry like you always do When I see the sun, it reminds me of you protecting me Since you told me I was always the one you wanted to see When I see my mothers ring, I'm remembering I wanted to marry As you reply as I do too since your my princess or my fairy When I see my lips, I still feel that kiss Even though last time tried we miss Now when I see you I want to say I love you As I want you to reply me too I don't like it that much but I was timing myself so yeah! I lost by one minute!!!!!!! No! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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Jun 20, 2007, 12:15 PM	#2 (permalink)
Little negi sensei Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 359 Thanks: 17 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 1,076	Re: Remembering you Well you say you dont like all of your poems but i like them all.Great job __________________
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Jun 20, 2007, 12:18 PM	#3 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Remembering you Thanks tons! I really thank you but this doesn't that good at all. So I will try better!!!!! So yeah! But thank you! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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Jun 21, 2007, 12:41 AM	#4 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,869 Thanks: 56 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 49,365	Re: Remembering you A nice poem Kuwi... seemed very sad to me though... I like the way you've written this poem, I like the things you're saying here, I like the length of the poem, I like every single thing about this poem I guess... I enjoyed reading it! __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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Forcefly Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Canada Posts: 59 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Re: Remembering you I like the poem it was good I think it speaks to all because at one point or another we've all wanted to say "I love you" to some one right? __________________ Thanks to FLawed love the sig. Pressure makes gems, Ease makes decay.
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Jun 21, 2007, 09:15 AM	#8 (permalink)
Forcefly Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Canada Posts: 59 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Re: Remembering you Don't mention it but I really would be interested in seeing more of your literary works. __________________ Thanks to FLawed love the sig. Pressure makes gems, Ease makes decay.
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Jun 24, 2007, 12:45 PM	#10 (permalink)
iluvmyloser Àddïctëd tø \|ăüghïñg :) Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ♥>>WHERE y0U WANNA bE??<<♥ Posts: 653 Thanks: 26 Thanked 15 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 10,597	Re: Remembering you hey kiwi love the poem has very much feeling in it keep it up foward to seing more bye!♥ da princess __________________ ♥~Thanks Eve for this on my Bday!Bow down to your royal highness~♥ Animal Wonders\|Myyy Spaceee!
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Jun 25, 2007, 08:16 AM	#11 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Remembering you Awwww.....Thank you! I really thank you so much! So Thank you indeed! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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