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    Remnant

    Remnant


    The shadow calls your broken memories
    Haunting your mind
    Unlocking the sealed door

    Lingering in your psyche
    Destroying your self-security
    Introducing reality

    Though you continue to conceal
    The self that you fear
    The self that was once yours
    Now vexes your dreams

    Trying to smash your recollections
    Scattering the pieces again
    Hiding the you that pursuits your present

    Killing all that is remnant
    Erasing the remnants of what once was

    Seeing your reflection erodes your happiness
    For your fear was once yourself
    But it’s shadow remains
    Remains with you

    Turning your back on things of yore
    Shutting your eyes to look away
    Hating all that was you
    That now sits in your silhouette

    Executing your history
    To dim the shade you cast
    Spreading the shards of your past

    And Though the fragments will mend,
    You still try to forget, ravage what is left
    Desolate all that is remnant.
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    Re: Remnant

    kool! i liked it............it was dark...............everyone wants to forget something in their past.........

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    Re: Remnant

    Quote Originally Posted by Shu
    kool! i liked it............it was dark...............everyone wants to forget something in their past.........
    Thanks. I'm glad that people can relate to the poem..

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    Re: Remnant

    Hmm it was pretty good little bro.....but......I don't know. Maybe it's the wording you use.....It just feels like something's missing from your poetry....but that's just me.

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