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Old Feb 08, 2007, 09:32 AM   #1 (permalink)
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"Rescue me from This"

I want you so much,
I long for your touch.
Rescue me my sweet,
save me from this.

My mind screams for your salvation,
my body calls for your desecration.
Save me my sweet,
help me fight this.

I lust for your feel,
I yern for it real.
Help me my sweet.
releave me of this.

Cut me!
Bleed me!
Release me!
Ease me!
Releave me my sweet.
Rescue me from this.
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Old Feb 08, 2007, 10:01 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: "Rescue me from This"

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I want you so much,
I long for your touch.
Rescue me my sweet,
save me from this.

My mind screams for your salvation,
my body calls for your desecration.
Save me my sweet,
help me fight this.

I lust for your feel,
I yern for it real.
Help me my sweet.
releave me of this.

Cut me!
Bleed me!
Release me!
Ease me!
Releave me my sweet.
Rescue me from this.
I liked the begining but it got a little to dark for my tastes near the end. I liked it though! Keep 'um comming!
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Old Feb 08, 2007, 10:05 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: "Rescue me from This"

the bottom kinda got wild and good, but the begging is really good lol, hope to read the next one.
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I liked the begining but it got a little to dark for my tastes near the end. I liked it though! Keep 'um comming!
Sorry... It did get a little dark there toward the end. But I'm happy you liked it.

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the bottom kinda got wild and good, but the begging is really good lol, hope to read the next one.
Thankyou. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it too.
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