"Rescue me from This"

Darkened_Star · Feb 08, 2007, 09:32 AM

I want you so much,
I long for your touch.
Rescue me my sweet,
save me from this.

My mind screams for your salvation,
my body calls for your desecration.
Save me my sweet,
help me fight this.

I lust for your feel,
I yern for it real.
Help me my sweet.
releave me of this.

Cut me!
Bleed me!
Release me!
Ease me!
Releave me my sweet.
Rescue me from this.

Mattness · Feb 08, 2007, 10:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Darkened_Star

I want you so much,
I long for your touch.
Rescue me my sweet,
save me from this.

My mind screams for your salvation,
my body calls for your desecration.
Save me my sweet,
help me fight this.

I lust for your feel,
I yern for it real.
Help me my sweet.
releave me of this.

Cut me!
Bleed me!
Release me!
Ease me!
Releave me my sweet.
Rescue me from this.

I liked the begining but it got a little to dark for my tastes near the end. I liked it though! Keep 'um comming!

*hellknight* · Feb 08, 2007, 10:05 AM

the bottom kinda got wild and good, but the begging is really good lol, hope to read the next one.

Darkened_Star · Feb 08, 2007, 10:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mattness

I liked the begining but it got a little to dark for my tastes near the end. I liked it though! Keep 'um comming!

Sorry... It did get a little dark there toward the end. But I'm happy you liked it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by hellknight

the bottom kinda got wild and good, but the begging is really good lol, hope to read the next one.

Thankyou. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it too.

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Darkened_Star Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Earth Posts: 334 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,118	"Rescue me from This" I want you so much, I long for your touch. Rescue me my sweet, save me from this. My mind screams for your salvation, my body calls for your desecration. Save me my sweet, help me fight this. I lust for your feel, I yern for it real. Help me my sweet. releave me of this. Cut me! Bleed me! Release me! Ease me! Releave me my sweet. Rescue me from this. __________________
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hellknight Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: South dakota, Native American Posts: 1,448 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 15,699	Re: "Rescue me from This" the bottom kinda got wild and good, but the begging is really good lol, hope to read the next one.
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