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We want to change the world
But all we have to do is respect our selves,
For the times we patrinize each other
We could spread the wealth.
i cry, but not for me
But for the diein,
For every human being in the bloody clothes they lye in.
Everybody at war, not with each other but with ourselves
We're traped in our selves and noone can hear our yells.
We bang on the dungeon walls trying to find what is love
We can love nobody till we love ourselves.
We say we're traped in the darkness
We have no idea what is the darkness unless we're that freakin heartless.
We think the answer to our cries is that stainless steal knifves
But its the powersource to all our painful cries.
You see all these girls flashin all their goodies
While remembering the times they were in pajama footies.
Don't move so fast, for that sinful hour may be your last.
That's why when you see poeple like me, you try to put us down
But your really bringing your self down.
I have a note for all of ya'll
Respect, Love, and Hold yourself and you may never fall.
Shippo101:This is what MOST and I said MOST poeple like me go throught or think.[/FONT]![]()
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Spelling and the correct color of font wouldve been nice.
Seduced by Flesh
pretty poem gurl. I love it. I think you were working on it in class I believe but anyways its good. keep it up
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It was ok but you seem to have a lot of knowing in this
It is good as you read it you think of a all of the thing that are going on in world and how much would change if we just changed our selfs
KOOL POEM GIRLEY LUV YA KEEP IT UP
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