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    Restricted Pain

    Torn apart
    From spoken words
    Sliced through
    This loving heart
    Was hurt
    But tried to stop
    It reflecting
    Back to you

    Love Broken
    Shattered to pieces
    Remained connected
    To support you
    Loving you
    Was all I did
    Supporting you
    Like girlfriends should
    Pushed away
    To protect you
    Stopping you
    From causing more
    Restricted Pain
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    Re: Restricted Pain

    Again I say,imagery. You have the bare bones of a poem. Now? I need to visualize something.
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