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    The Resurrection of Memories

    I've been looking for you,
    all of my existance.
    You are the better half,
    of this soul created.

    I know this because,
    daily I'm reminded,
    of the past lives we've shared,
    and the past memories.

    They are all I have left.
    They are all that keep me.
    They keep me alive,
    and my hopes with it from dying so.

    Your beautiful mane...
    i can see if once again.
    a lost memory,
    that has risen back to the surface.

    the flooded waters of my mind,
    could not hold you forever,
    and thus with all my might,
    i too try to rise up.

    i try to stay afloat,
    above these waters,
    so that my memories,
    do not faded again.

    i still remember your fragrance.
    still remember your beautiful waves.
    your bright red hair,
    that causes the setting sun jealousy.

    your eyes...
    so green and full of joy.
    no more joy though,
    than i when i gazed into them.

    that soft skin,
    that was like milk,
    and with some silky tenderness,
    just as smooth.

    these memories return,
    and for once in my existance...
    i enjoy the return of a love,
    that i once had again.

    return to me memories,
    and make me smile like this more.
    for i know if i find her again,
    she'll remember my promise i made.

    and thus with every rose,
    that i gaze upon,
    her memory becomes full again,
    and her beauty brought to me once more.

    I will remember you...
    with every rose that i see...
    ever single white rose...
    it will remind me of you.

    as I promised you they would....



    White Rose

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: The Resurrection of Memories

    that is beautiful. some parts i didnt really understand and i THINK you made a grammar mistake in your poem, but overall it was great!!=)

    IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
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    Re: The Resurrection of Memories

    Oh my god... this is so beautiful... you almost made me cry!!! But no! I'll be strong today!!! ^^
    But indeed- this is truly wonderful and I really, really enjoyed reading this and I hope to see more.

    Hmmm... did you mean to write mane in the first line of the fourth stranza? Because I read it as "name" at first and it seems more beautiful ^^
    And this:
    "They keep me alive,
    and my hopes with it from dying so."
    Is kinda confusing. Although I understood what you mean and... it's beautifull...

    Anyways. I hope to see more such beautiful poems from you! ^^ I only hope you cheer up a bit ^^ Though wonderful poems come out of your nostalgy...

    I read the other poem you just posted too... it's alright. But it's more as just saying out your thoughts. I'd suggest to look at it later and fix it up to make a nice poem (no, I would never do it myself )

    And happy Thanksgiving to you too (though I don't celebrate it ).Thank you for this poem. ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: The Resurrection of Memories

    I put my poetry down, and leave it. Poetry shouldn't be perfect, as the person writing them never is. It's something I leave. I write it... and hope you understand. We all have flaws... but even our flaws can be more beautiful than the more perfect parts of us. Thank you for reading all.


    White Rose

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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