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    Revival of my Bleach Tribute!

    "The Beginning"

    I was so different from everyone else,
    My hair, the things I see and touch.
    But it was when I heard the howl.
    A monster was chasing the girl,
    I give flowers at the place she died.

    And she came, to slay that monster.
    She ignored me and walked on.
    She did that again and I saw a black butterfly.
    She fought to protect my family
    even though she didn't know them.
    Rukia, The Death God

    I wanted to protect them, they were my
    Reasonability and mine alone.
    She gave me the strength to protect them
    But it came at a price, I had to protect everyone.
    I slayed monster but a Destroyer of Souls
    came along and challenged me.

    He was foolish, he attracted those monster
    and the largest one of all. It was huge,
    cloaked in black and only a white face.
    It threatened the destroy my world
    But I couldn't let it, I resist it and sent it
    back to the abyss where it came from.

    I began to feel like she was part of the family
    Someone I could trust and protect.
    But she was hiding something that she
    Thought I wouldn't be able to handle it.
    She was right, I couldn't handle her brother.
    Her friend and brother came to take her back.

    I failed to protect her but she didn't wanted
    me to protect her. I wanted to bring her back.
    I couldn't move and the rain came, I was dying.
    And he came, the exiled Death God.
    He helped me to gain my strength again,
    He showed how to use my sword, my resolve.
    My friends came and supported me.
    I was glad that Inoue came as well.

    This thread will contain a few poems so I would advise you guys to check in this thread. Hope u guys enjoy this.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Revival of my Bleach Tribute!

    i like this how this poem mixed with the atory you told
    and its sort of sad how that girl you loved couldnt be protected
    the pain of loss is greta and you portayed it very well here/ awesome pome
    blade cant wait to read the next one
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Revival of my Bleach Tribute!

    It is the first episode of bleach!
    It's like the summary of it...
    but then you made much easier to understand....
    i like your poem....^-^

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    Re: Revival of my Bleach Tribute!

    "My strength"

    When I started out, I knew I had strength.
    My sword was as tall as me and yet,
    I failed to ask my Sword it's name.
    I entered an underground room
    and regained my strength there.

    When I was in danger of becoming
    a Hollow, He came, The Grand Old Man.
    Zangetsu was his name. He showed
    me what he could really do.
    He thought me little by little.
    Letting me know who he was.

    I soon could fight and use my resolve
    To cut through everyone who stood against me.
    Several did and yet I prevail, bringing down
    A third ranked member, a LT and a captain.
    But I had to come back from the dead to defeat
    Him, Zaraki Kenpachi Captain of the 11th squad.

    He was the Devil himself, he loved it
    He loved the fighting, my strength equalling to his.
    I could only run at first but He came again to show me
    how to defeat. I needed to defeat myself first.
    A white version of me appeared and
    I fought and won back Zangetsu's trust.

    I stood back up, I cut Zaraki again and again,
    But He wouldnt stop till we were forced to
    Pour everything we had into a single attack.
    I had won but at a price. Soon, I
    wanted to save Rukia but her Borther was there
    again. He was Death himself, emotionless, flawless.

    But the Goddess of Flash forced me to
    train myself even harder to achieve Bankai.
    I fought against the Old Man again to
    Gain his strength once more. I couldn't
    do it for awhile, He had always managed to
    Crushed my mind. I struggled but soon
    Began to gain ground, to fight back.

    I did it and defeated him. Smashing his sword
    And asking him to lend me his strength to fight
    Our enemies. We gained each other's trust and
    Formed a fighter's bond.

    this is the second one from my bleach tribute tht i did awhile back

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Revival of my Bleach Tribute!

    *applause*
    this is dedicated to Bleach?! whootage~!
    XD wakakaka~!
    ichigo~
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    "The Destroyer"

    I was the last of my kind,
    The last proud warrior of my family.
    My father rejected his gift since,
    He lived in the real World
    But I couldn't ignore my
    Grandfather's words, "We are
    The Quincies, we must protect the world."

    He trained me, helped me to
    Gained strength but I couldn't
    Help him when he was surround by
    Those Hollows. Not even those
    Death Gods would help him.

    All he wanted was for us and the Death Gods
    To work together but they were too rigid.
    Believing they had the sole right
    To purifying all souls. I hate them
    Yet my Sensei held no grudge against them.
    I did, there was no help for him
    But I realise it was me who should have
    Help him, not those Death Gods.
    I shouldn't have hated them but
    Help them as my sensei wanted me to.

    I trained with the last thing he gave me,
    The Spirit disperser, a white glove.
    For three days and three nights,
    I trained firing my arrows till I bled.
    Soon, I could help those I wanted to help.
    But the journey did not go as smooth
    As I wished it was. I was soon protect Inoue.
    A monster of a man appeared to defeat us,
    But he never seen the true power of the Quincy.
    It was over before it even started.

    But there was one, the most unhuman I seen.
    Yet he was a captain in the Society.
    I fought him but knew I could die.
    I thought at least Inoue was safe.
    My limbs soon failed me as he hadn't
    Used his full strength. He was the one
    Who made my sensei last days Hell.
    And I intended in return the favor to him.
    I removed my glove and soon attack him
    With Hell hath no fury like the Quincy's.

    He released a monster, a something
    Not of any world and yet
    I managed to destroy it
    But didn't managed to kill him.
    He truly showed his form,
    a scum with no form.
    I breathe a sigh of relief
    but knew this came at a price.
    I lost my powers and only my mind
    Remained with me.

    it's easy to say who i wrote this abt

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    "Chado"

    I knew i was different coz of my size,
    I had fists bigger than anyone else's.
    But I never fought, I could have.
    But my Granddad taught to never fight,
    There's a reason why I was born this way.
    To protect and help my friends.
    He gave me a coin which I cherished
    for a long time.

    Then I met him, another who was
    Different like me, Icihgo. I helped him
    But didn't fight back. He was hot-headed
    And called me Chado ever since.
    I enjoyed my time by the riverbank,
    It was peaceful but those people were back
    And taunted me. They took my pendant.

    He came to help me out again,
    So reckless and yet there was a certain kindness
    About him, never caring if he got hurt.
    At the end of it, he managed to get it back,
    And he asked me to if I didn't want to
    Fight for myself, I could fight for him.
    I smiled and agreed from there we were friends.

    I could soon see those monsters and I saved
    two people from them, a bird and Icihgo's sister.
    I ran and ran till Rukia came and helped me.
    I fought back with my fist, I could full a energy
    raising within me when I fought that thing.
    When i fought that something happened,
    My right had a strange black armour on it
    But I understood that I could use it
    To protect people from anything.

    I trained to get even better,
    To help Icihgo achieve his goal.
    When we entered the Society,
    I was lucky not to fight anyone.
    Till he blocked my way, Kyouraku Shunsui
    Captain of the 12th squad.
    He was peaceful like me but
    He was obeying orders,
    I was fighting for Icihgo's sake.
    But I failed and still remain as a friend to him.

    plz comment...i know there are bleach fans are out!!!

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    Re: Revival of my Bleach Tribute!

    i like this oder your talking about it sounds like you have to be elite to join
    and will he be part of this sqaud ir am i look at it the wrong way i like this
    poem because it talk about not fighting unless you have a reason and that prettymuch how it is in realy life as well. awesome peom i havnt ever watched beach but i like the peom about it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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