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    ~Rhyme~

    You sing a song,
    and shed a tear,
    for the end of life,
    is coming near.

    You've got the blade,
    and got the time,
    your heart gives us,
    one more rhyme.

    You stab yourself,
    darkness comes,
    your heart swells,
    and body numbs.

    You wake in heaven,
    or maybe hell,
    there is no difference,
    rom what I can tell.

    ~fin~

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    Re: ~Rhyme~

    I like this one. It ryhmes well and flows pretty good too. My favorite poems ryhme. All in All... I like it. ^_^

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    Re: ~Rhyme~

    Very nice, indeed. I like your word play alot. ^_^


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    Re: ~Rhyme~

    hmm.. I like this poem too.
    You have a talent for writing..
    Your poems flow well and have a good rhythm..
    There very well done. ^_^

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    Re: ~Rhyme~

    It was a very dark and sad poem. It would be great for halloween. I look forward to reading your next one.
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